Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 " The Premonition - Chapter 16"A Wartime Romance
27 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do enjoy reading this novel. I think it's about time Bill knows about the baby. I do hope he stays away from grenades, especially since they both had the same dream. I can't wait for the next post.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I do enjoy reading this novel. I think it's about time Bill knows about the baby. I do hope he stays away from grenades, especially since they both had the same dream. I can't wait for the next post.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Hi Barbara! WOW! Thank you for the AWESOME six star rating and review. A "SALUTE!" Your continued support means a lot to both of us! God bless you! We are thrilled you are enjoying this novel. Cathy hopes Bill stays away from the grenades, too! Chapter 17 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
beautifully written work as always, my friend. Veitnam was a terrible war, and so sad how many soldiers returned home with mental or physical injuries, how many didn't return at all. I worked at the veteran's home in Iowa for 10 years, and met many of them. Take take and have a Merry Christmas, my friends~Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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beautifully written work as always, my friend. Veitnam was a terrible war, and so sad how many soldiers returned home with mental or physical injuries, how many didn't return at all. I worked at the veteran's home in Iowa for 10 years, and met many of them. Take take and have a Merry Christmas, my friends~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Hi Debbie! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME 6 star rating and review. You rock! So true and sad what you share here. We're so glad you found this beautifully written. Chapter 17 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful New Year! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is good. The thoughts and dreams of what may or may not happen. It kept me intrigued through out. I look forward to reading more. Ah.. She has to tell him about the baby.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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This is good. The thoughts and dreams of what may or may not happen. It kept me intrigued through out. I look forward to reading more. Ah.. She has to tell him about the baby.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Hi Bobby Jo! We really appreciate you stopping by to read and review Chapter 16 of Love Long Distance. Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it and are looking forward to reading more. Chapter 17 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a very Happy New Year!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from nomi338
Oh my God. This takes me back. I was in the Air Force from 1960 -1964 on active duty. So very thankful that I did not have to go to Vietnam, so sorry for those who did. I almost missed this chapter, because I forgot that I had decided to start following the story. This is so well written and so evocative that my heart is shaken. I have had dreams that were so real that I was sure that they were destined to happen. I can hardly wait to read the next episode.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Oh my God. This takes me back. I was in the Air Force from 1960 -1964 on active duty. So very thankful that I did not have to go to Vietnam, so sorry for those who did. I almost missed this chapter, because I forgot that I had decided to start following the story. This is so well written and so evocative that my heart is shaken. I have had dreams that were so real that I was sure that they were destined to happen. I can hardly wait to read the next episode.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Hi Nomi! Thank you for the AWESOME six stars and review. Oh, we wish we had a review vote to give you because you really deserve one! A double "SALUTE!" God Bless You! We appreciate you sharing your own story with us, and we're happy you found this well written and evocative. Chapter 17 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Bill and Cathy,
Nice piece of Romance Fiction in continuation, having lucid wording; smooth, spontaneous, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Use of Premonition dreams / precognitive dreams is particularly noteworthy.
I'm waiting for the 17th chapter.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Hello Bill and Cathy,
Nice piece of Romance Fiction in continuation, having lucid wording; smooth, spontaneous, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Use of Premonition dreams / precognitive dreams is particularly noteworthy.
I'm waiting for the 17th chapter.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Hi RPSaxena! Thanks so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 16 of Love Long Distance. Thank you also for your continued support. You won't have to wait too long for Chapter 17. It's already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Hi Bill/Cathy, Most Welcome!
Merry Christmas
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Happy New Year!
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Hi Bill/Cathy, Most Welcome!
Merry Christmas
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Happy New Year!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Ulla
Hi you two. Great new continuation to the story and trust both of you to make something happen. I suppose, one day, grandpa will stop having the influence on all what is happening. All best. Ulla:))).
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Hi you two. Great new continuation to the story and trust both of you to make something happen. I suppose, one day, grandpa will stop having the influence on all what is happening. All best. Ulla:))).
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Hi Ulla! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Thank you also for your continued support. Chapter 17 is in the works and coming soon. As for Grandpa, he's lovable and wise, and he means a lot to both Bill and Cathy. However, he won't always be included in a future chapter. Lots more to come, so stay tuned. Wishing you a great holiday and a Happy New Year! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You already know how much I like reading your story...it just gets better and better. I thought there might be a little bundle coming. I hope Bill makes it home soon. Waiting for the next chapter....
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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You already know how much I like reading your story...it just gets better and better. I thought there might be a little bundle coming. I hope Bill makes it home soon. Waiting for the next chapter....
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Hi Rosemary! Awww....such kind words! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support. We're so glad you feel it gets better and better. Cathy hopes Bill makes it home, too! Chapter 17 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Reading this later chapter makes me anxious to read the preceding chapters. The story is well written with very descriptive prose and an interesting scenario that needs answers. The moment in time you have chosen is perhaps one of the worst American experiences until of course, 911 and the Far-East Wars. This book promises the reader a satisfying story.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Reading this later chapter makes me anxious to read the preceding chapters. The story is well written with very descriptive prose and an interesting scenario that needs answers. The moment in time you have chosen is perhaps one of the worst American experiences until of course, 911 and the Far-East Wars. This book promises the reader a satisfying story.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Hi Raffaelina! This chapter put you on the edge of your seat? HURRAH! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. We're so thankful for your support. Your comments are great and much appreciated! Chapter 17 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Tootie. This is interesting as you go through the dream sequence. It was easy to forget this was a dream. The ominous thing was Cathy had a similar dream. Hmmmm. I will say the grenade taking out the gator was pretty interesting. Robert
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Hello Tootie. This is interesting as you go through the dream sequence. It was easy to forget this was a dream. The ominous thing was Cathy had a similar dream. Hmmmm. I will say the grenade taking out the gator was pretty interesting. Robert
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Hi Robert! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your continued support means a great deal to both of us! Yes, they both had the same dream. Was it a premonition? We hope not, 'cause Bill is gonna be a daddy! Glad you found this interesting. Chapter 17 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful holiday season and a Happy New Year! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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You're welcome. Merry Christmas to you. Robert
Comment from RShipp
The KABOOM! paragraph was hilarious. I have the same thoughts from conversations with my dad. (They weren't about alligators.)
Both people having the premonition can't be a good sign.
Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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The KABOOM! paragraph was hilarious. I have the same thoughts from conversations with my dad. (They weren't about alligators.)
Both people having the premonition can't be a good sign.
Enjoyed.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Hello RShipp! We're worried about those premonitions, too! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 16 of Love Long Distance. Glad the KABOOM paragraph gave you a chuckle, and you enjoyed this! We hope you continue to follow along. Chapter 17 is in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful holiday week and a Happy New Year! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy