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Comment from judiverse
An excellent nonet entry. Very attractive presentation and the use of rhyme makes a great added touch. Great thoughts about the power of a woman's eyes. Others can see her wisdom. Right on with your syllable count, too. judi
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An excellent nonet entry. Very attractive presentation and the use of rhyme makes a great added touch. Great thoughts about the power of a woman's eyes. Others can see her wisdom. Right on with your syllable count, too. judi
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Thank you, Judi.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, well it can be true that a woman's eyes can hold a lot of power over a man and also hold a wealth of truths. It's a great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:))
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Hi Bill, well it can be true that a woman's eyes can hold a lot of power over a man and also hold a wealth of truths. It's a great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:))
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Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet. One thing about women that men will never believe is that we already know the truth when we start well selected questions.
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A very well-written Nonet. One thing about women that men will never believe is that we already know the truth when we start well selected questions.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
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Men have only one or two motivations so knowing them isn't rocket surgery.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You obviously don't underestimate the power of a woman here, and these days they all know what they want! I love the power in this nonet, especially being a woman! Much enjoyed Bill, love Dolly x
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You obviously don't underestimate the power of a woman here, and these days they all know what they want! I love the power in this nonet, especially being a woman! Much enjoyed Bill, love Dolly x
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Thanks, Dolly. To women!
Comment from Sally Law
This is is wise cracker, Bill. Technically sound Nonet, aptly illustrated, and ready for the upcoming contest. Sending you my best wishes for the contest. :)
(Just about everyone I know is in this one.) Nonet fever, I suppose.
Sal ;)
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This is is wise cracker, Bill. Technically sound Nonet, aptly illustrated, and ready for the upcoming contest. Sending you my best wishes for the contest. :)
(Just about everyone I know is in this one.) Nonet fever, I suppose.
Sal ;)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
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You have to feed a fever; right?
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Is is starve a fever and feed a cold? I forget. ;)
Comment from Mia Twysted
She takes no crap and she sees right through you and knows your history. There is no use in telling her your lies they will not resonate with her. That is what I take away from this piece.
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She takes no crap and she sees right through you and knows your history. There is no use in telling her your lies they will not resonate with her. That is what I take away from this piece.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
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You've got those eyes, Mia.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved that you rhymed all through the nonet! On the phone screen, can't see the formatting. Like the message of the clear communication from the gal with soul-piercing eyes. Best wishes in the contest!
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Loved that you rhymed all through the nonet! On the phone screen, can't see the formatting. Like the message of the clear communication from the gal with soul-piercing eyes. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
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Thanks, lyenochka, for giving this a look.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This from a man who has both a lovely wife and wonderful daughter... do I remember that correctly? Please don't ding me if I messed that up... but your nonet offering seems to flow from an understanding and not a pandering... just beautiful, Bill! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
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This from a man who has both a lovely wife and wonderful daughter... do I remember that correctly? Please don't ding me if I messed that up... but your nonet offering seems to flow from an understanding and not a pandering... just beautiful, Bill! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
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I was hoping my pandering tone was set on low. : )