A Full Moon
romancing the Earth28 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
Very nice imagery in words and artwork - perfectly matched! Methinks you will garner many votes in this contest. Obviously, you have already achieved the 'recognized' status from the FS community.
Yes, moonlight kisses are nice in nature and in life (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Melissa,
Very nice imagery in words and artwork - perfectly matched! Methinks you will garner many votes in this contest. Obviously, you have already achieved the 'recognized' status from the FS community.
Yes, moonlight kisses are nice in nature and in life (-;
Mark
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much, Mark. :)
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
What a beautiful picture and a lovely way to think about the moon. A concept I've never thought about before. Your poem is well-written. Your great word choice paints a vivid image in the reader's mind.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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What a beautiful picture and a lovely way to think about the moon. A concept I've never thought about before. Your poem is well-written. Your great word choice paints a vivid image in the reader's mind.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Misty. I am glad you liked .. A Full Moon.. Thanks so much.
Melissa
Comment from Janetsue
This is a gorges picture and your connective words make it all a wonderful entry in the one line poem contest. I'm a very picture-orientedkind of person and I can see why this one is the one you chose to use. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is a gorges picture and your connective words make it all a wonderful entry in the one line poem contest. I'm a very picture-orientedkind of person and I can see why this one is the one you chose to use. Best wishes!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi there!! I am so glad you liked this one, Janet. I like to find good photos too it helps add depth to the write. Thanks so much.
Melissa
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You're very welcome, Melissa!
Comment from Pantygynt
Gosh! It seems close enough to clean its teeth on the twigs. We are coming up to a full moon now and it should be really good tonight if the weather stays as clear is it is now. Last night there was quite a bit of cloud so the moon was being a tad bashful and playing peek-a-boo.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Gosh! It seems close enough to clean its teeth on the twigs. We are coming up to a full moon now and it should be really good tonight if the weather stays as clear is it is now. Last night there was quite a bit of cloud so the moon was being a tad bashful and playing peek-a-boo.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your fun review, Jim. I would love to see the full moon, so may peek at it tonight after class. Talk to you soon.
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, Melissa.
-A good topic for your monostich.
-The imagery is effective, along
with personification.
-You show the romantic
nature of the moon as
it "kisses the earth."
-Usually, the monostich is
one line; not one sentences.
-You could try reducing your font size.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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-Very nice image, Melissa.
-A good topic for your monostich.
-The imagery is effective, along
with personification.
-You show the romantic
nature of the moon as
it "kisses the earth."
-Usually, the monostich is
one line; not one sentences.
-You could try reducing your font size.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate the note that explained the mono stitch is supposed to be one line vs. one sentence. I have always wondered about that.
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem about the moonlight that comes down to earth at night to give the trees a supple kiss. An amazing photo to complement your one-line poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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A very well-written one-line poem about the moonlight that comes down to earth at night to give the trees a supple kiss. An amazing photo to complement your one-line poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much, Sandra.
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is a picture of a very big moon brushing its lips across the trees here, this is an inventive presentation Melissa, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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That is a picture of a very big moon brushing its lips across the trees here, this is an inventive presentation Melissa, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Dolly. Thank you. It just looked like it matched the verse. :)
Melissa
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yes, this is a beautiful entry for the One Line poem contest. A wonderful picture to add to the effect this short piece has. I don't know why I even bothered to enter with your entry to contend with... sigh. ~DDxxxxxx (to act as six stars).
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Yes, this is a beautiful entry for the One Line poem contest. A wonderful picture to add to the effect this short piece has. I don't know why I even bothered to enter with your entry to contend with... sigh. ~DDxxxxxx (to act as six stars).
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hello DD. Thanks for the great review and six star wannabes. Haha. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from shaffer40
What a great, descriptive response to the one-line poem prompt. I think you'll do well in the contest. I saw the prompt and wished I could write something this good. When I read this, I get a picture of a beautiful night in the country woods, with a big, yellow moon.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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What a great, descriptive response to the one-line poem prompt. I think you'll do well in the contest. I saw the prompt and wished I could write something this good. When I read this, I get a picture of a beautiful night in the country woods, with a big, yellow moon.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hello Shaffer... thank you very much. What a lovely review.
Melissa
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You're more than welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice, Melissa. Your one-line poem is well described in just a few words and the image is dramatic and striking. A fine accompaniment. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is very nice, Melissa. Your one-line poem is well described in just a few words and the image is dramatic and striking. A fine accompaniment. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hello Marilyn. Thank you for your lovely comments!!
Melissa