Free Verse Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Beyond the Wit of Daylight Hours"A collection of free verse poems
45 total reviews
Comment from Darkhorse555
i found the reflections in the silent pools within the night shades where you moulded the newborn day to be painted so beautifully excellent pen very poetic your visions
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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i found the reflections in the silent pools within the night shades where you moulded the newborn day to be painted so beautifully excellent pen very poetic your visions
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Delighted to hear that this struck a chord with you. I appreciate your review and comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Ulla
Hi Tony, I liked your poem a lot and you do have a way with words that makes your poem so beautiful to read. It's a pleasant surprise away from your great story. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Hi Tony, I liked your poem a lot and you do have a way with words that makes your poem so beautiful to read. It's a pleasant surprise away from your great story. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Ulla. I haven?t written any poetry for a while. It makes a nice change of pace. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Mastery
Hi Tony. So good to see you back at other writing in addition to your ongoing novel "The
French Letter"
Your way with words is outstanding, like these lines for instance:
"A bidding to fare well,
as blow the winds into
the fleeting sails
of friendship."
Bravo, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Hi Tony. So good to see you back at other writing in addition to your ongoing novel "The
French Letter"
Your way with words is outstanding, like these lines for instance:
"A bidding to fare well,
as blow the winds into
the fleeting sails
of friendship."
Bravo, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Bob. It?s a while since I?ve written any poetry. It makes a nice change of pace. Glad you enjoyed it. All good wishes, Tony.
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: ) Bob
Comment from Sally Law
How lovely this is, Tony. Your poetry is layered with wonder. It is necessary for me to read it several times to take it all in. The beginning is always the lure for me and yours was no exception. " I have wandered in dark places, and sought reflection in silent pools bathed in moonlight,"
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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How lovely this is, Tony. Your poetry is layered with wonder. It is necessary for me to read it several times to take it all in. The beginning is always the lure for me and yours was no exception. " I have wandered in dark places, and sought reflection in silent pools bathed in moonlight,"
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Sally. It?s a while since I?ve written any poetry. It makes a nice change of pace. Glad you enjoyed it. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Beautiful poem. Love it. Such wonderful words. I see that you live in Australia. The country looks so gorgeous there. I would stay away from some of your wild animals if I would visit.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Beautiful poem. Love it. Such wonderful words. I see that you live in Australia. The country looks so gorgeous there. I would stay away from some of your wild animals if I would visit.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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What a lovely review, and thanks very much for the five stars. I haven?t been writing much poetry recently and am delighted that you enjoyed this one. Best wishes, Tony.
No crocodiles around here but one or two venomous snakes to avoid!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A wonderful poem depicting the source of much wisdom and many great thoughts. So much can be gleaned, at times, from solitude and meditation. Almost like building castles in the sand. Lovely!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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A wonderful poem depicting the source of much wisdom and many great thoughts. So much can be gleaned, at times, from solitude and meditation. Almost like building castles in the sand. Lovely!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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What a lovely review, and thanks very much for the five stars. I haven?t been writing much poetry recently and am delighted that you enjoyed this one. Best wishes, Tony.
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What a lovely review, and thanks very much for the five stars. I haven?t been writing much poetry recently and am delighted that you enjoyed this one. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from Heather Knight
Your poetry is always magnificent. This is no exception. Each word is perfect in itself.
I had to read it twice to understand better, but that's because I'm not great at poetry myself.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Your poetry is always magnificent. This is no exception. Each word is perfect in itself.
I had to read it twice to understand better, but that's because I'm not great at poetry myself.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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What a nice thing to say, Maria. Thank you for your lovely comment and for the sixth star. Very much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Gloria ....
What a beautifully atmospheric poem this is. I can imagine being there hearing the ethereal music, the reflections in the pools far outside the realm of the Earthly world.
You do up a free verse really nice, Tony so I hope to read more of them from you. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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What a beautifully atmospheric poem this is. I can imagine being there hearing the ethereal music, the reflections in the pools far outside the realm of the Earthly world.
You do up a free verse really nice, Tony so I hope to read more of them from you. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I?m basking in the warmth of your generous comments. I haven?t written much poetry recently, but must get back to it. It?s my first love, but I?m determined to get the perishing novel finished, just to prove to myself that I can.
Comment from Gail Denham
A nice poem - must be a form of some kind - enjoyed reading this. It seems there are multiple layers to your poem - having to do with friendship - dreams - visions even.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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A nice poem - must be a form of some kind - enjoyed reading this. It seems there are multiple layers to your poem - having to do with friendship - dreams - visions even.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Many thanks for your review of this, Gail. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is an excellent
poem, Tony, that
doesn't require any artwork.
-The imagery is very good,
and there is a smooth flow of ideas.
-It is also reflective, as indicated
in the first verse.
-I like how you describe what
you found in these places-
"the truth in dreams" and "faerie land."
-The conclusion is very good, too,
and ends with the same reflective
mood as the beginning.
-I enjoyed seeing your poetry.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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-This is an excellent
poem, Tony, that
doesn't require any artwork.
-The imagery is very good,
and there is a smooth flow of ideas.
-It is also reflective, as indicated
in the first verse.
-I like how you describe what
you found in these places-
"the truth in dreams" and "faerie land."
-The conclusion is very good, too,
and ends with the same reflective
mood as the beginning.
-I enjoyed seeing your poetry.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Very many thanks for this review Pam, and the sixth star. Lovely comments about my poem. Glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes, Tony.
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You are very welcome and deserving, Tony. I appreciate your reply.