Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Please go back threw all so slowly and correct the wording in your story. As you read out loud you will see what needs to be fixed so it reads smoothly.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thanks country ranch Rider I was just told that previously by another person.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, my goodness... this is just an awful story from both the perspective of the boys that carried it out to the poor girl and her parents... very, very sad. I have to ask, though, what does Beyonce have to do with the imagination... or should that be 'Beyond'... ? I just wasn't really sure there....

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

Thanks you betting there are some errands I just didn't get a chance to reread it.
Ricky

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Waw this story left me with mixed emotions. Kids that become tools of evil and destroyers of innocence and beauty on the lamb of God. Thanks for sharing ð???

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

I can't put out the second post on this cuz i ran out but tomorrow i will put up the second post that i already wrote.
Ricky and thanks.

reply by Iza Deleanu on 19-Aug-2019

Thank you

reply by Iza Deleanu on 19-Aug-2019

Thank you

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

I didn't get a chance to edit this and a new writer here named Eva Lovel.
who is only been here since March and I've never posted which is strange or has any is following anybody talks about being muted and tries to educate me on how to write when I've been doing it 16 and 1/2 years just because on my folliard talked about how I was trying to learn the right which of course that was just fictional.

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

I didn't get a chance to edit this and a new writer here named Eva Lovel.
who is only been here since March and I've never posted which is strange or has any is following anybody talks about being muted and tries to educate me on how to write when I've been doing it 16 and 1/2 years just because on my folliard talked about how I was trying to learn the right which of course that was just fictional.

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019

I didn't get a chance to edit this and a new writer here named Eva Lovel.
who is only been here since March and I've never posted which is strange or has any is following anybody talks about being muted and tries to educate me on how to write when I've been doing it 16 and 1/2 years just because on my folliard talked about how I was trying to learn the right which of course that was just fictional.