Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Anon, this is really very good. You have written a descriptive piece in only seven words that reveal so much. Not easy to get a message across with so few words. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thank you, Dorothy!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This seven-word poem, Roadmaps, says a lot in a few words. Laugh lines and sorrow furrows can be baked together on a world-worn countenance.

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, Bill!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with your 7 well-chosen words and perfect picture. Your title makes readers think one thing, but your words show a different story about the word 'roadmaps.--clever. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, Jan!

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Great title. Great brevity. Great presentation. A strong contender for my vote. It's hard to convey much with seven words. You did, and with three alliterated letters to boot! Bravo.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, rd!

reply by rama devi on 26-May-2019

:-)))

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Wow! You put all of that into seven words! But they fit perfectly! Crows feet and furrowed brows deeply carved into a face perfectly shows the roadmaps of a life! They are roadmaps to the heart as well!

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, Patricia!

Comment from MsPetra

Excellent

I didn't think you could pack so much into so few words. Very well done on that regard.
Besides that, I liked what you had to say. You are very intuitive.

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thank you, Petra!

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Indeed it does leave clues. I've seen people grow older overnight after a traumatic event.
They say we should be proud of our wrinkles... I don't know if I totally agree.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, Maria!

Comment from Lance S. Loria

Excellent

Great seven words poem. You selected extremely complimentary artwork. You achieved the goal of making an impact. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary. .

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, Lance!

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

Well done! I thought this was clever,
concise, thoughtfully done, and
truly meaningful.

I admire anyone who can make a sensible, gripping poem
using only seven words.

Good luck in this contest. I think you'll do well.

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thanks, Meri!

Comment from karenina

Excellent

You did it and I voted for this entry. It is pithy and clever and wry...and human! Far and away the best entry in this contest in my opinion! Karenina

 Comment Written 25-May-2019

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reply by the author on 26-May-2019

Thank you so much, Karenina!

reply by karenina on 27-May-2019

My pleasure!--Karenina