NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "An Attempted Blitz"National Poetry Writing Month
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Comment from tfawcus
Breathlessly upbeat! We used to play this as a word game as a child. The consequences can be quite hilarious. Not sure what the rules actually were, but I like your poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Breathlessly upbeat! We used to play this as a word game as a child. The consequences can be quite hilarious. Not sure what the rules actually were, but I like your poem.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you
God bless you :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, An Attempted Blitz, reads like a cross between a loop poem and a stream of consciousness which connects the next random thought to a continuum headed for a complete idea.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This poem, An Attempted Blitz, reads like a cross between a loop poem and a stream of consciousness which connects the next random thought to a continuum headed for a complete idea.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you
God bless you :)
Comment from lyenochka
I like it, too! And it reads to me like a stream of consciousness loop poem. I smiled at "Dooms has a day" and I like the sense of busyness at the same time reflecting as one was hurried to catch a flight.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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I like it, too! And it reads to me like a stream of consciousness loop poem. I smiled at "Dooms has a day" and I like the sense of busyness at the same time reflecting as one was hurried to catch a flight.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you
Have a happy & safe 4th of July :)