Oh, no...coffee!
It giveth and taketh away...22 total reviews
Comment from Susanjohn
Very Clever use of words! :-) I suppose for coffee lovers THAT would be "grounds for fighting!" lol... I enjoyed reading this...very nicely done! :-)))
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Very Clever use of words! :-) I suppose for coffee lovers THAT would be "grounds for fighting!" lol... I enjoyed reading this...very nicely done! :-)))
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Susan!
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:-) You're welcome
Comment from Candace Nola
Well done, Chip! Humorous! Great word choices, good rhythm and flow. The artwork is a great selection too. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Well done, Chip! Humorous! Great word choices, good rhythm and flow. The artwork is a great selection too. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Candace! Just a quick, silly ditty that I wanted to get in before the 2nd leg of a short story competition I'm in (http://www.nycmidnight.com/). Check it our if you're not familiar with it, very well run, established competition. Very cool format. I'm entering the short screenwriting contest next week, my first such foray.
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That?s awesome Chip. Best of luck to you in that contest! I hope you keep writing.
Comment from LG Wolfe
Hi Chip. I loved your choices of words in a combination that seemed to spark fire. And - having gone without coffee for a week recently, I totally understand. Nothing beats that first sip.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hi Chip. I loved your choices of words in a combination that seemed to spark fire. And - having gone without coffee for a week recently, I totally understand. Nothing beats that first sip.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I agree, LG, just took that sip myself! Thanks for weighing in.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Chip,
Ha ha ha! Laughing with, not at, you here. This is very well written with a perfect image to complement your verse. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Hi Chip,
Ha ha ha! Laughing with, not at, you here. This is very well written with a perfect image to complement your verse. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Jan!
Comment from Miss Sherry
Funny, funny and weirdly great. Not a coffee drinker, I marvel at the lengths drinkers will go to get some. Play on words delights me. You have done a great job with an entry to this contest. I wish you the best of luck. I can smell my neighbor's coffee...maybe I could snag you a cup.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Funny, funny and weirdly great. Not a coffee drinker, I marvel at the lengths drinkers will go to get some. Play on words delights me. You have done a great job with an entry to this contest. I wish you the best of luck. I can smell my neighbor's coffee...maybe I could snag you a cup.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the review and the humor, Sherry! Oh, and for the offer of a neighborly cup. I've had my quota for the day, but thanks!
Comment from nancyjam
Terrific word choice to rhyme this entry to the
"Rhyme without Coffee." contest.
Thoughts of that morning cup is what gets me out of bed in the morning,
so I can relate to your clever piece.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Terrific word choice to rhyme this entry to the
"Rhyme without Coffee." contest.
Thoughts of that morning cup is what gets me out of bed in the morning,
so I can relate to your clever piece.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Nancy, I appreciate you taking the time and offering a kind review!
Comment from patcelaw
I am not a coffee drinker so this is hard for me to relate too. But I do understand that coffee drinkers are very true to their drink of choice.
Patricia
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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I am not a coffee drinker so this is hard for me to relate too. But I do understand that coffee drinkers are very true to their drink of choice.
Patricia
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Yes, we are!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about the craving for coffee that is so overwhelming that we can kill for a cup of coffee. It is best to never run out of coffee.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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A very well-written rhyming poem about the craving for coffee that is so overwhelming that we can kill for a cup of coffee. It is best to never run out of coffee.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Agreed, Sandra- thanks for the review!
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Agreed, Sandra- thanks for the review!
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Agreed, Sandra- thanks for the review!
Comment from Ross E Silke
This is delivered effectively and sounds great. It's carefully crafted and composed in a roundabout way that brings light humour to the issue of coffee is out. The words are chosen carefully and the meter and flow are consistent. Entertaining and fun to read and reread. Delightful. I like your high complex language in word choices as you put together creatively a number of interesting words I need my dictionary to decipher--intelligent and clever. You write at an advanced level. Interesting and fun. I hope you found a replenishment of coffee to meet your needs as it sounds like your very much enjoy the experience of it, lol. Best,
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This is delivered effectively and sounds great. It's carefully crafted and composed in a roundabout way that brings light humour to the issue of coffee is out. The words are chosen carefully and the meter and flow are consistent. Entertaining and fun to read and reread. Delightful. I like your high complex language in word choices as you put together creatively a number of interesting words I need my dictionary to decipher--intelligent and clever. You write at an advanced level. Interesting and fun. I hope you found a replenishment of coffee to meet your needs as it sounds like your very much enjoy the experience of it, lol. Best,
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the gracious and detailed review, Ross!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this vibrant and tantalising write Chip, full of vitality for the tastebuds and when the coffe jar is empty, then we have a fight on our hands! He he he, a fun write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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I love this vibrant and tantalising write Chip, full of vitality for the tastebuds and when the coffe jar is empty, then we have a fight on our hands! He he he, a fun write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Dolly!