'Tis But a Feeling...
The JOY of NEW LIFE!15 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I liked the flow and the form really made the piece work. I love the positive emotion in the poem. Great job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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This was a good read. I liked the flow and the form really made the piece work. I love the positive emotion in the poem. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review -- your time is much appreciated. :)
Comment from Randa Dayle
AWWW..what Lovely 5-7-5 about spring. Lovely picture, and your poem is all about spring, all three lines!! Good luck in the contest! Keep on sharing with us!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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AWWW..what Lovely 5-7-5 about spring. Lovely picture, and your poem is all about spring, all three lines!! Good luck in the contest! Keep on sharing with us!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your review -- your time is much appreciated. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation, Mystery Author. I like your color choices. Good job on the syllable count per line. I like the word in all CAPS in each verse--nice attributes of Spring. The picture is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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This is a great presentation, Mystery Author. I like your color choices. Good job on the syllable count per line. I like the word in all CAPS in each verse--nice attributes of Spring. The picture is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your great comments, Jan -- so very appreciated! :) ;) Be sure to have an awesome rest of the weekend! ;)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is beautiful and I love the way they flow and intertwine together. Each one flows into the other seamlessly and beautifully. I really enjoyed this well written trio. Great job and very well done!
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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This is beautiful and I love the way they flow and intertwine together. Each one flows into the other seamlessly and beautifully. I really enjoyed this well written trio. Great job and very well done!
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Jeffrey -- always good to hear from you! :) ;) Have a wonderful evening out there! ;)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This a really beautiful spring poem and a great contest entry. Nothing amiss here to suggest improving upon. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This a really beautiful spring poem and a great contest entry. Nothing amiss here to suggest improving upon. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your great comments, Jan -- so very appreciated! :) ;) Be sure to have an awesome rest of the weekend! ;)