Wonders
A contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
I enjoyed this read, unknown writer. I liked the flow and the imagery in the piece. I like the way it went from a beautiful day to wondering if it will rain. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed this read, unknown writer. I liked the flow and the imagery in the piece. I like the way it went from a beautiful day to wondering if it will rain. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, This is a nice example of Pleiades poetry. I liked the Wonders you described in your poem, sunrise, days of misty air, birds singing and rain. All things that are natural wonders. Nice job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Hello Author, This is a nice example of Pleiades poetry. I liked the Wonders you described in your poem, sunrise, days of misty air, birds singing and rain. All things that are natural wonders. Nice job.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest. As you wander through this life I hope you never get tired of the wonders that God has given to us. Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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This is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest. As you wander through this life I hope you never get tired of the wonders that God has given to us. Patricia
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Your color contrast was not working for me. Old eyes need colors to be the opposite.
Your verse is so simple and beautiful. These are things worth waiting for and please us greatly. I looked over the form and you have everything right. I wish you the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Your color contrast was not working for me. Old eyes need colors to be the opposite.
Your verse is so simple and beautiful. These are things worth waiting for and please us greatly. I looked over the form and you have everything right. I wish you the best in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
What a weird and crazy poem form. *smile* These types of poems always seem off the beaten track to me for some reason, but yours definitely fills all the requirements. I wish you much luck!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
What a weird and crazy poem form. *smile* These types of poems always seem off the beaten track to me for some reason, but yours definitely fills all the requirements. I wish you much luck!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. The good luck wishes were appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Like open star clusters, like seven daughters of Atlas, who were metamorphosed into stars, seven wonders represent about living in appreciation; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Like open star clusters, like seven daughters of Atlas, who were metamorphosed into stars, seven wonders represent about living in appreciation; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments here, we are surrounded by wonders and I just wish I could zone in on them and nothing else to soothe my soul, your poem did this for me, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed the sentiments here, we are surrounded by wonders and I just wish I could zone in on them and nothing else to soothe my soul, your poem did this for me, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written pleiades poem with the letter 'W' describing the natural wonders of nature and how we perecieve each one from the rising sun, to the rain that falls and all the wonders in between.
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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A very well-written pleiades poem with the letter 'W' describing the natural wonders of nature and how we perecieve each one from the rising sun, to the rain that falls and all the wonders in between.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments.