God Speaks
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Walk Talk with God & Guide Us Living"God Speaks
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Comment from sunnilicious
This pandemic has made an impact on many of our lives. God should always be part of us, but we don't always remember to make time for God. Now is the perfect time to connect our heart. This poem was a beautifully thought out and nicely written. Excellent work :)
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This pandemic has made an impact on many of our lives. God should always be part of us, but we don't always remember to make time for God. Now is the perfect time to connect our heart. This poem was a beautifully thought out and nicely written. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from amada
I think this is a tremendous work of love and inspiration. Your lines are full of tenderness and clean insight. We need these words in these times of fear. We must go and trust a higher power.
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I think this is a tremendous work of love and inspiration. Your lines are full of tenderness and clean insight. We need these words in these times of fear. We must go and trust a higher power.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from kahpot
A very descriptive poem from the heart, you expressed your feelings quite wonderfully in this well done Acrostic, love the artwork, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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A very descriptive poem from the heart, you expressed your feelings quite wonderfully in this well done Acrostic, love the artwork, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
There is something about acoustic poetry that's fun to read. I love to read poems about God, anyway! He's so great to write about. I think your poem expresses how you feel about Him.
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There is something about acoustic poetry that's fun to read. I love to read poems about God, anyway! He's so great to write about. I think your poem expresses how you feel about Him.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello ALCREATOR LITT DEAR,
This is a beautiful creative informative acrostic poem about God. The image you chose is so fitting for your piece. I concur with your assessment regarding letting God guide our walk. His love letter, the Bible, is the ultimate book to use for instructions for life. We walk sometimes foolishly when we separate ourselves from the Holy One. As you have said, "Gods's Word is needed for Christian living. This is a beautiful piece, a keeper. I pray that our Lord and Savior continue to guide your writing and your life. He honors those who honor Him. Thank you for this beautiful Acrostic Free Verse poem. Have a beautiful blessed day in the Lord on purpose. Good luck with your goal of writing 100,000 reviews. I have been off of FanSory for a while. But, I am prayerfully back online with this platform for a while. Stay Bless, Safe, Healthy, and Home. Good job!! Happy writing:-)
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Hello ALCREATOR LITT DEAR,
This is a beautiful creative informative acrostic poem about God. The image you chose is so fitting for your piece. I concur with your assessment regarding letting God guide our walk. His love letter, the Bible, is the ultimate book to use for instructions for life. We walk sometimes foolishly when we separate ourselves from the Holy One. As you have said, "Gods's Word is needed for Christian living. This is a beautiful piece, a keeper. I pray that our Lord and Savior continue to guide your writing and your life. He honors those who honor Him. Thank you for this beautiful Acrostic Free Verse poem. Have a beautiful blessed day in the Lord on purpose. Good luck with your goal of writing 100,000 reviews. I have been off of FanSory for a while. But, I am prayerfully back online with this platform for a while. Stay Bless, Safe, Healthy, and Home. Good job!! Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Knowledge is not enough; demonstrate, practice living before us
How true. Knowledge is pretty much ineffective in guiding our behavior. A well written acrostic, my friend~Debbie
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Knowledge is not enough; demonstrate, practice living before us
How true. Knowledge is pretty much ineffective in guiding our behavior. A well written acrostic, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Walk Talk with God & Guide Us Living
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the acrostic free verse poem contest. Got created men and women to live in his likeness but we are flawed. We try to gain wisdom through out our lives. Good job.
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Walk Talk with God & Guide Us Living
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the acrostic free verse poem contest. Got created men and women to live in his likeness but we are flawed. We try to gain wisdom through out our lives. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Anya Trofimova
Another very strong piece of writing! You powerfully communicate our inseparable connection to God. Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.
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Another very strong piece of writing! You powerfully communicate our inseparable connection to God. Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi!
I didn't count, but I presume you made all 22 references to God in this free verse poem. Nice job making it an acrostic, too! That is an added challenge.
Kim
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Hi!
I didn't count, but I presume you made all 22 references to God in this free verse poem. Nice job making it an acrostic, too! That is an added challenge.
Kim
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your very descriptive spiritual poem conveys a powerful message about the evil and lack of respect for God in this fallen world. Yes, believers must set the example by living righteous lives.
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Your very descriptive spiritual poem conveys a powerful message about the evil and lack of respect for God in this fallen world. Yes, believers must set the example by living righteous lives.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
