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Comment from LaFrance
An excellent prologue, I'm intrigued to read more and glad to catch your story early on. It is going to be interesting how you are going to answer the four questions and what about her parent's murders were they solved?
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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An excellent prologue, I'm intrigued to read more and glad to catch your story early on. It is going to be interesting how you are going to answer the four questions and what about her parent's murders were they solved?
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from seaglass
This sounds interesting. I am glad to get in one the first so I can follow it through. Iḿ familiar with bot settings so that should make it even more interesting. You are one prolific women with writing books.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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This sounds interesting. I am glad to get in one the first so I can follow it through. Iḿ familiar with bot settings so that should make it even more interesting. You are one prolific women with writing books.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
Good afternoon, Barbara
Excellent prologue. The information was more than enough to intrigue the reader. One already has an understanding what makes the main tick. I wonder of the Major will be able to follow McKenzie's lead or butt heads. Looking forward to the novel.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Good afternoon, Barbara
Excellent prologue. The information was more than enough to intrigue the reader. One already has an understanding what makes the main tick. I wonder of the Major will be able to follow McKenzie's lead or butt heads. Looking forward to the novel.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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They butt heads. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from giraffmang
He believes her abusive boyfriend, George Whitney murdered her. - insert a comma after Whitney.
Just a suggestion, but I'd be tempted to turn the questions in the plot section into a type of book blurb rather than the current format.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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He believes her abusive boyfriend, George Whitney murdered her. - insert a comma after Whitney.
Just a suggestion, but I'd be tempted to turn the questions in the plot section into a type of book blurb rather than the current format.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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I think you're correct about the book blurb. Thank you for the help.
Comment from Sasha
This sounds like a great story and I anxiously look forward to reading it. YOur enthusiasm for writing impresses me and your awesome imagination is inspirational. You have done a great job in summarizing this new book and as I said, I look forward to reading it.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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This sounds like a great story and I anxiously look forward to reading it. YOur enthusiasm for writing impresses me and your awesome imagination is inspirational. You have done a great job in summarizing this new book and as I said, I look forward to reading it.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from tfawcus
Some interesting sounding characters that you have sketched out here and several good questions to kick-start the plot. I'll be interested to see how things develop. Sorry to hear you've been unwell.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Some interesting sounding characters that you have sketched out here and several good questions to kick-start the plot. I'll be interested to see how things develop. Sorry to hear you've been unwell.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement. I am still not 100%, maybe 80..
Comment from Dawn Munro
Okay, I am not going to miss this one if I can help it. And your prologue makes this book sound so-o-o tempting, Barbara.
I'm sorry you've been sick. I hope you're feeling much better now.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Okay, I am not going to miss this one if I can help it. And your prologue makes this book sound so-o-o tempting, Barbara.
I'm sorry you've been sick. I hope you're feeling much better now.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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I hope you catch my writing. I'm always enjoy your comments.
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I will do my best. I love your writing. :)
Comment from apky
This already sound like a great story, Barbara, packed with intrigue and action. I can only encourage you to go for it. You always did manage to twine romance and crime and come up with a wonderful story.
You're right about story changing. Both plot and character development change as the writer continues the story. My characters always have the annoying victory is pulling me to where they want to go, not where I planned to have them go.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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This already sound like a great story, Barbara, packed with intrigue and action. I can only encourage you to go for it. You always did manage to twine romance and crime and come up with a wonderful story.
You're right about story changing. Both plot and character development change as the writer continues the story. My characters always have the annoying victory is pulling me to where they want to go, not where I planned to have them go.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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My characters rule my stories. PS, That's how Shana got a kitten. I didn't want to write one in. She won.
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from TheStoryMan
This sounds like it will be a good story. It sounds like there are a couple of good mysteries to solve. The premise of your story is interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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This sounds like it will be a good story. It sounds like there are a couple of good mysteries to solve. The premise of your story is interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great intro to your upcoming book. You gave readers some valuable info and made them wish to read more. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes with your new book. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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This is a great intro to your upcoming book. You gave readers some valuable info and made them wish to read more. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes with your new book. Jan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the support.
