Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this very short poem is long on enjoyment. You have done a fine job with this, extra kudos for pragmatism. and expediency..

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018

Hi meeshu, Thank for reviewing this one a bit out there but thats me anyway LOL Cheers

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is 'S Under Ten Poetry Contest Entree' Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky1024

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Hi Ricki1024, Thank you for your review for my nine words . I hope it makes people smile Cheers Christine

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

And you have done it in nine with rhyme, under ten, you have stated your wish to go for the requirement; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Hi DR ALCREATOR Thanks for your review Well that's what is said keep it under ten LOL Cheers