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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I bet you wish this had really happened! Or, did it??? My word, that would be amazing. It's a brilliant contest entry. It certainly made my eyes water, lol. Well, if it's not true, lets hope you win the contest! Well done, and good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I bet you wish this had really happened! Or, did it??? My word, that would be amazing. It's a brilliant contest entry. It certainly made my eyes water, lol. Well, if it's not true, lets hope you win the contest! Well done, and good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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The amount is accurate.
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How wonderful, what a lovely surprise, and you didn't know anything about it. Bless her heart. :)
Comment from damommy
Wouldn't that be a surprise! This is a very pleasant story, and you did well in the few allotted words. Perfect picture, of course. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Wouldn't that be a surprise! This is a very pleasant story, and you did well in the few allotted words. Perfect picture, of course. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thanks, da
Comment from judiverse
This is amazing! I wish my parents had been so thoughtful and generous. I could use those dollars. Very clearly presented and great ending. With all that money, you could surely pay more than 2 member cents! Best of luck in the contest with this great one. judi
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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This is amazing! I wish my parents had been so thoughtful and generous. I could use those dollars. Very clearly presented and great ending. With all that money, you could surely pay more than 2 member cents! Best of luck in the contest with this great one. judi
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I may have exaggerated my wealth.
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This made a great flash fiction story. So convincing you'll have people hitting you up for money. judi
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! This is listed as fiction, but I hope that's an oversight! I need a loan... about ten grand will keep me afloat for a while. Message me for my address. Your luck is my luck... a new cliche I just invented. :)
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Wow! This is listed as fiction, but I hope that's an oversight! I need a loan... about ten grand will keep me afloat for a while. Message me for my address. Your luck is my luck... a new cliche I just invented. :)
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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It's all true except the part about my mother, the money, and the check.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, thank you very much for your Mother's forward thinking! He he he, I hope this is true Bill, good luck with the contest, this is definitely a winner! Love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness, thank you very much for your Mother's forward thinking! He he he, I hope this is true Bill, good luck with the contest, this is definitely a winner! Love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Unfortunately, the only thing about this that is true, other than my mom's passing, is the ten grand in the bank in 1982. Accounts were paying 8 to 10 percent back then, and if I'd been able to forget about that money until now, this is what it would be worth.