Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I'm not a poet, so don't have any critical remarks.
I thoroughly enjoyed you taking me back to those days with so many familiar titles.
Your rhymes were perfect for me.

:) e

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018

Thanks, this was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

What a fun poem. I thought I missed the disco era but I recognized all your song references. Great artwork to compliment your work.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you it was a fun write. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.

Comment from Sandra Piddock

Excellent

I'm in admiration that you managed to work so many song titles in and keep the rhythm going. It made me smile, and I love the illustration. Great stuff.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you it was a fun write. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Excellent style, I think this way of including the song titles into the poem is very unique. Very well constructed and I wish you well in this contest. Don

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you, it was a fun write. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

NICE WORK UP FOR THIS CUTE POEM PLAYING OFF JOHN TRAVOLTA SONG STAYING ALIVE A MOVIE WELL KNOW TO ALL IN SATURDAY NIGHT FEVER YEARS AGO.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you it was a fun write. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, well done - I enjoyed the read, and having lived the scene, can easily relate. The rhyming rhythm was casual and unforced, making the read fluid and engaging. It conforms perfectly with the rules of the prompt - best of luck in the contest...

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you it was a fun write. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.

reply by evesayshi on 17-Oct-2018

You are very welcome...Eve

Comment from Rickie1

Exceptional

O My God! Does this bring back memories. Polyester leisure suits, open shirts with gold chains and discos we meat markets. Meter and rhyme. You did just fine. I steeped back in time. Well done sublime.

Rickie

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you, It was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

HAHAHAHA!!! Okay, no way this poet is going to fault this thoroughly entertaining poem, and yeah, man, I'm an old hippie, but I also lived through the disco era-- you brought it to LIFE!

Now go win in the booth. :)))

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thanks Old Hippie, I'll try and do that. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.

reply by Dawn Munro on 17-Oct-2018

Good luck! :)

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there,

Who cares about rhythm and rhymes when you are talking about the BEST music ever?

Well, maybe not the BEST music, but I do remember all the songs you mention, and dancing to those beats was SO much fun.

Good luck in the contest,

~MP~

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you for reading and reviewing my work. This was fun to write.I appreciate you taking the time andrhe5 star rating.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Well, I think this is a cool write, myself, author. It throws away any and all restraints of writing a poem. I remember when I was in college, our English/poetry teacher said "If you ever write a rhyming poem for this class, I will give you a failing grade. She explained that her reason being that people writing rhymers are so concentrated on finding the right rhyme, they lose sight of a natural flow in the writing. Amen. I concur.

Bless you. Bob

Good job on this, author. (and I like disco by the way) Bless you, Bob

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018

Thank you reading and reviewing my work.