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Bible Acrostic Saviour11 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent Bible acrostic author as each line describes the understand and devotion to the saviour.
Just one word intwined needs to be replaced as it is not a word, you might consider something like interlocked or intertwined.
That said, a superb poem and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Excellent Bible acrostic author as each line describes the understand and devotion to the saviour.
Just one word intwined needs to be replaced as it is not a word, you might consider something like interlocked or intertwined.
That said, a superb poem and best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks Gloria. Will do.