What You Express That's Your Base
A 4 Line Poem; You're sum of words, scribe and or expression133 total reviews
Comment from pharp
Very few words speak volumes; this is a most profound and thought-provoking message.
Wisdom and truth shine through in this poem. How we treat others and the words we express are a reflection of who we are. Thanks for reminding us of this significant factor in our daily living. Thanks for sharing a powerful read and message.
Blessings...Portia
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Very few words speak volumes; this is a most profound and thought-provoking message.
Wisdom and truth shine through in this poem. How we treat others and the words we express are a reflection of who we are. Thanks for reminding us of this significant factor in our daily living. Thanks for sharing a powerful read and message.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from fretless
It is very true that we are what we speak, and it is always a good thing to be reminded of this. We must watch our words, for it is with words that we create and destroy. Thanks for the thought and the reminder.
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It is very true that we are what we speak, and it is always a good thing to be reminded of this. We must watch our words, for it is with words that we create and destroy. Thanks for the thought and the reminder.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from roof35
Your poem has wise messages and your illustration pairs well. Your notes are thorough and quite helpful. Thank you for sharing these well-written words.
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Your poem has wise messages and your illustration pairs well. Your notes are thorough and quite helpful. Thank you for sharing these well-written words.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Laurie Holding
Oh my word, I'm a new fan. After reading these contest rules, I immediately wanted to try my hand at this, this restrictive and challenging fence around language. The more restrictions, the more important each word, and in this example, even the characters! (My first constructive criticism would have been to offer a few delicate punctuation marks onto the palette, but then I re-read and saw the character restrictions! Gorgeous.)
But I'm not becoming a fan because of this piece. It's your author comments that grabbed me. Thank you so much for this beautiful coffee break in my day. Blessings on you and your work.
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Oh my word, I'm a new fan. After reading these contest rules, I immediately wanted to try my hand at this, this restrictive and challenging fence around language. The more restrictions, the more important each word, and in this example, even the characters! (My first constructive criticism would have been to offer a few delicate punctuation marks onto the palette, but then I re-read and saw the character restrictions! Gorgeous.)
But I'm not becoming a fan because of this piece. It's your author comments that grabbed me. Thank you so much for this beautiful coffee break in my day. Blessings on you and your work.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from heavenempress
Beautiful piece of work. Simple and true. Keep it up. The piece flows nicely because of a few meaningful words. I highly recommend your work to others
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Beautiful piece of work. Simple and true. Keep it up. The piece flows nicely because of a few meaningful words. I highly recommend your work to others
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
People suffer because they have an emotional reaction to whatever Is said to them. Sometimes silence is golden. I enjoyed your thought-provoking short poem. Good luck!
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People suffer because they have an emotional reaction to whatever Is said to them. Sometimes silence is golden. I enjoyed your thought-provoking short poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-May-2021
Comment from Zan Zan
I don't take it lightly Whenever I see a random scripture on the net: I know that's abba speaking. So thank u Elohim for letting me come across this user acc.
"All scripture is given by inspiration of God, and is profitable for doctrine, for reproof, for correction, for instruction in righteousness: ] That the man of God may be perfect, throughly furnished unto all good works."
-And to you poet- may our lord continue to use us n Guide us in his way. this was beautiful ik abba's smiling down at this piece.
(funny also how I'm studying Galatians . I'm on the 3rd chap lol!)
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I don't take it lightly Whenever I see a random scripture on the net: I know that's abba speaking. So thank u Elohim for letting me come across this user acc.
"All scripture is given by inspiration of God, and is profitable for doctrine, for reproof, for correction, for instruction in righteousness: ] That the man of God may be perfect, throughly furnished unto all good works."
-And to you poet- may our lord continue to use us n Guide us in his way. this was beautiful ik abba's smiling down at this piece.
(funny also how I'm studying Galatians . I'm on the 3rd chap lol!)
Comment Written 19-May-2021
Comment from crzypnter
I have always been amazed of those in our poetic world that can say so much with so few words. Unfortunately I am not one of those people. lol great job and love the artwork. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
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I have always been amazed of those in our poetic world that can say so much with so few words. Unfortunately I am not one of those people. lol great job and love the artwork. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 19-May-2021
Comment from TheTurtleDude
Wow! I've never seen somebody make such a deep poem with only 15 words. I could've never done that. I love the message of this poem too.
Best wishes,
TheTurtleDude
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Wow! I've never seen somebody make such a deep poem with only 15 words. I could've never done that. I love the message of this poem too.
Best wishes,
TheTurtleDude
Comment Written 19-May-2021
Comment from Senyai
AlCreator
Your fifteen word poem is speaking a truth we have learned from reading the Bible as children. Out of your mouth you will be measured by the words you speak. Paraphrasing here, but I feel you have expressed this truth. We actually are a sum of our actions and words.
Very thought provoking and you followed the prompt well-even though it was from 2018 :-)
Best wishes,
Senyai
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AlCreator
Your fifteen word poem is speaking a truth we have learned from reading the Bible as children. Out of your mouth you will be measured by the words you speak. Paraphrasing here, but I feel you have expressed this truth. We actually are a sum of our actions and words.
Very thought provoking and you followed the prompt well-even though it was from 2018 :-)
Best wishes,
Senyai
Comment Written 19-May-2021