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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, I guess the outcast one is telling the story. You did a good job, Bill, with your poem. When I saw the picture I immediately thought of the nursery rhyme "Three Little Kittens." Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Haha, I guess the outcast one is telling the story. You did a good job, Bill, with your poem. When I saw the picture I immediately thought of the nursery rhyme "Three Little Kittens." Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Jan, fo4 giving this a look. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
I'm not going to try to guess what accent that was but I recognize the nursery rhyme. I never understood that one. Why did they eat pie with their mittens on? Just too many questions on that one.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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I'm not going to try to guess what accent that was but I recognize the nursery rhyme. I never understood that one. Why did they eat pie with their mittens on? Just too many questions on that one.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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I was going for German accented English
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 about the three kittens who lost their mittens and decided it will be time to take a nap closely together in a row, to stay warm and cozy and cute.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 about the three kittens who lost their mittens and decided it will be time to take a nap closely together in a row, to stay warm and cozy and cute.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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They sleep, lose things, and eat.
Comment from damommy
The fourth one seems to have hung on to his mittens.
Perfect picture for his poem. It's true - they lost their mittens and Mother sent them right to bed.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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The fourth one seems to have hung on to his mittens.
Perfect picture for his poem. It's true - they lost their mittens and Mother sent them right to bed.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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If they were cats these lose their spats
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lol
Comment from Kerry Foley
Awe...This is such a cute little 5-7-5, Bill. I love your kitty talk and an adorable picture. They're so cute, I want one. lol ~Kerry
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Awe...This is such a cute little 5-7-5, Bill. I love your kitty talk and an adorable picture. They're so cute, I want one. lol ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Kerry
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You're very welcome. Sorry for the late reply:) Enjoy your weekend.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Hahaha! Too cute! The adorable photograph makes this cute and clever five - seven - five, done in classic cat meme style. (Bet that drove your spell-checker crazy!)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Hahaha! Too cute! The adorable photograph makes this cute and clever five - seven - five, done in classic cat meme style. (Bet that drove your spell-checker crazy!)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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I have to back up and repeat the last letter of suspect words to prevent auto correction.
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You are a patient writer, LOL.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Bill, this is so silly that it's funny. I love the "hmm" in the second line. It's natural speech pattern that people use regularly. When I first read it I was transported back to the late sixties when I used to partake of an illegal substance. This was how I often sounded when under the influence! Hugh
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Bill, this is so silly that it's funny. I love the "hmm" in the second line. It's natural speech pattern that people use regularly. When I first read it I was transported back to the late sixties when I used to partake of an illegal substance. This was how I often sounded when under the influence! Hugh
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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That?s funny. I was hoping to sound like English with a German accent.
Comment from Boogienights
Without a care in the world. If you keep putting these adorable cat pictures up, it would make my day(s). I love animals, but cats are my fave, they are very loving despite what some people say. Thanks for writing these cute poems.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Without a care in the world. If you keep putting these adorable cat pictures up, it would make my day(s). I love animals, but cats are my fave, they are very loving despite what some people say. Thanks for writing these cute poems.
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thanks, BN.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well Bill you have invented a new language here, kitty talk! I loved it and the picture is so cute! You have a style of your own Bill, best wishes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Well Bill you have invented a new language here, kitty talk! I loved it and the picture is so cute! You have a style of your own Bill, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Dolly. I was hoping it would sound like English with a German accent.