Of Hearts and Heartaches
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "When You Left"Poems about falling in or out of love.
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Comment from kiwijenny
Aw...and holes in hearts are hard to heal...wholehearted love is for real
Well penned...love if unrequited is the hardest love of all
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God bless
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Aw...and holes in hearts are hard to heal...wholehearted love is for real
Well penned...love if unrequited is the hardest love of all
Watch The Holiday
God bless
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent rating and your very kind words. Very much appreciated.
Comment from aryr
Very well done, you definitely followed the criteria of a haika and heartache. I hope you do well in the contest, good luck. I loved the picture which was so appropriate for the poem- a bleeding heart, I must admit I have never seen a pure white one, so it was beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Very well done, you definitely followed the criteria of a haika and heartache. I hope you do well in the contest, good luck. I loved the picture which was so appropriate for the poem- a bleeding heart, I must admit I have never seen a pure white one, so it was beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Well thank you so much, aryr, for the excellent rating and your kind comments. Both much appreciated.
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You are most welcome.