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Comment from Jay Squires
I would like to make a suggestion, if I may. I'm having trouble understanding your intention with this paragraph, and it's grammatical, not in your message. You have a rather complicated sentence beginning with the word "yearning". Because of improper punctuation, you've created a run-on sentence that's difficult to read. "yearning for benefit and recognition, man acts under compulsion," It is after the word "Compulsion that you need either another semicolon or a period. Otherwise, it appears that all that follows "compulsion" results FROM compulsion, which is the result of NOT being righteous .... in short, what follows "compulsion" says exactly the opposite of what you intend. I know you are too conscientious to want that to happen.
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I would like to make a suggestion, if I may. I'm having trouble understanding your intention with this paragraph, and it's grammatical, not in your message. You have a rather complicated sentence beginning with the word "yearning". Because of improper punctuation, you've created a run-on sentence that's difficult to read. "yearning for benefit and recognition, man acts under compulsion," It is after the word "Compulsion that you need either another semicolon or a period. Otherwise, it appears that all that follows "compulsion" results FROM compulsion, which is the result of NOT being righteous .... in short, what follows "compulsion" says exactly the opposite of what you intend. I know you are too conscientious to want that to happen.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've done a fine job in conveying the message inspiring people to live on earth better, as required in the contest description. This is not an easy task using only sixty words, but sometime people listen to fewer words better than long lectures. I like it.
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You've done a fine job in conveying the message inspiring people to live on earth better, as required in the contest description. This is not an easy task using only sixty words, but sometime people listen to fewer words better than long lectures. I like it.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your advice is sound, that staying in God's Word--which cautions mankind to take care of the Earth--and using common sense will help us to live better, to be better.
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Your advice is sound, that staying in God's Word--which cautions mankind to take care of the Earth--and using common sense will help us to live better, to be better.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
Comment from Leann DS
In reading this, it reminds me of the scripture in the Bible that tells us that God has provided everything we need. Among those things are natural resources, plants, and other things that modern society often overlooked in place of man-made products such as drugs and vaccinations. That is what you your piece has made me reflect upon. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you.
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In reading this, it reminds me of the scripture in the Bible that tells us that God has provided everything we need. Among those things are natural resources, plants, and other things that modern society often overlooked in place of man-made products such as drugs and vaccinations. That is what you your piece has made me reflect upon. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
God is in the Holy Book. We should never look for man's rewards. They don't mean anything. If we work for Jesus and live for Him we will get our rewards. inspired men should show love to all. Thank you for sharing your work. Keep up the good work.
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God is in the Holy Book. We should never look for man's rewards. They don't mean anything. If we work for Jesus and live for Him we will get our rewards. inspired men should show love to all. Thank you for sharing your work. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 06-May-2021
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I agree with all your words here, just one thing, warmth and love are powerful aids to assist change. But in sixty words you have made a profound statement. Thankyou for sharing with us it's a fantastic message God bless you kind regards Meia xx
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I agree with all your words here, just one thing, warmth and love are powerful aids to assist change. But in sixty words you have made a profound statement. Thankyou for sharing with us it's a fantastic message God bless you kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 06-May-2021
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture. It has a worldwide implications. Your advice on this poem is applicable to worldwide. We all should, like your poem, "show examples of earthly living... and use gifts of Nature properly."
Nature is a beauty. We should accept it as a valuable gift and treasure it.
Thanks for sharing.
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I like the picture. It has a worldwide implications. Your advice on this poem is applicable to worldwide. We all should, like your poem, "show examples of earthly living... and use gifts of Nature properly."
Nature is a beauty. We should accept it as a valuable gift and treasure it.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-May-2021
Comment from Gert sherwood
Show examples, prove you're fit to live on Earth righteously
For God Live Righteously
Alcreator Litt Dear it looks like you took your time to express your thoughts of how well we can live by being honest, respectable, to fellow man on this earth..
Gert
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Show examples, prove you're fit to live on Earth righteously
For God Live Righteously
Alcreator Litt Dear it looks like you took your time to express your thoughts of how well we can live by being honest, respectable, to fellow man on this earth..
Gert
Comment Written 05-May-2021
Comment from MissMerri
Your philosophy is nicely expressed in these sixty words, and I commend you for your love of the earth and natural resources. You are right, man does act compulsively and unwisely at times. I loved your ending advice:
"inspire man, cause no suffering to man, incur no loss of human and natural resources, and use gifts of Nature properly." If only we all could adhere to your high standard. Thanks for the post. MM
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Your philosophy is nicely expressed in these sixty words, and I commend you for your love of the earth and natural resources. You are right, man does act compulsively and unwisely at times. I loved your ending advice:
"inspire man, cause no suffering to man, incur no loss of human and natural resources, and use gifts of Nature properly." If only we all could adhere to your high standard. Thanks for the post. MM
Comment Written 05-May-2021
Comment from GE Parson
Righteousness is a big word, used in the Bible hundreds of times, as I'm sure you know. Assuming you have a concodance, it's interesting to trace the word righteous or righteousnesss and see how it is used and to whom it applies. One of my favorite
passages is II Cor. 5:21. -Bro. Jerry
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Righteousness is a big word, used in the Bible hundreds of times, as I'm sure you know. Assuming you have a concodance, it's interesting to trace the word righteous or righteousnesss and see how it is used and to whom it applies. One of my favorite
passages is II Cor. 5:21. -Bro. Jerry
Comment Written 05-May-2021