Of Hearts and Heartaches
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Last Heart Standing"Poems about falling in or out of love.
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Comment from mally mack
The flow of your rhymes are wonderful. Line for line it kept me wanting to read on. I love the story being told here. It seems like one mega metaphor which is pretty cool if you ask me. I enjoyed this!
Mallory
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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The flow of your rhymes are wonderful. Line for line it kept me wanting to read on. I love the story being told here. It seems like one mega metaphor which is pretty cool if you ask me. I enjoyed this!
Mallory
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your R & R. also for the comments.