Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Exceptional

Cute and clever! I luv it! Your last line is priceless.

This is a great entry for the Lune contest, Craig. Best wishes for the contest. ~~ Connie

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2018

Thanks so much for the wonderful rating and stars, Connie. If this silly thing got a smile from you, then my job is done :) Most grateful - Craig

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Good witty satire. Made me chuckle in spite of myself (and then subtly groan, but that's a good thing in this kind of joke).

Ha ha ha.

Good form. Good presentaiton. Apology accepted. LOL

Perfect title.

Best wishes in the contest,
rd

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2018

Thanks for the good wishes, and the lovely comments, RD. I think I missed my true calling by being born a few centuries too late and a few thousand miles off course. Ancient Eastern Philosopher would sound so good on my CV :)

Most grateful - Craig

reply by rama devi on 08-Jul-2018

Indeed it would!! Love your fun comment. Thanks for the smiles today!

Warmly,
rd

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

hello Anon
Har, har har! No need to apologize, I think - this is snappy and very clever.
It is a challenge in the short forms to stand out and humour is very difficult even when you have a large canvas to work on. I think you have scored two out of two in this.
I would like to think your Lune will be warmly received in the contest. I think it is very strong.
I wish you well
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2018

Thanks very much for the wonderful comments, Phil. I think it's a bit of a lottery with the small ones, but I'm sure there'll be more worthy recipients. In any case, I really appreciate the support :) Craig

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

ROFLMAO. Craig! Shame on you. HAHAHAHAHA!!! TOO cute. Yes, he might not say doubt is bad, this is true. You are a bit of a rabble-rouser, aren't you? HAHAHAHA! Confucius say, "Man with big brain make others strain theirs."

Best of luck in the contest, you!

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2018

Rabble-rouser? Moi? Shirley, you jest! What's that? Oh, n/m :)

Many thanks for the lovely review, and the good wishes, Dawn. Most appreciated! Craig

reply by Dawn Munro on 08-Jul-2018

My name is not Shirley. LOL. Wadda ya mean, neverrr mind! :))

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Lune Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse is funny.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2018

Thank you for the very kind remarks and the good wishes, Sharon. Both are very much appreciated :) Craig