Comment from meeshu

Excellent

congratulations, Dragonskulls. that is an undertaking, although it seems to be coming naturally to you. very smooth transition from piece to piece.........meeshu

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 Comment Written 27-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thank you for the fantastic review, meeshu. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.

Ron

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, my goodness, this is epic, what a story within the lines of your poetry. A saga that held my attention throughout. It must have taken a long time to construct. I have no suggestions for improving this poetry, and it is a work I'd recommend to other readers for review, Ana.

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 Comment Written 26-May-2018

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reply by the author on 26-May-2018

Thank you for the great review, Ana. It took me around 3 days on and off to get it done. I worked on it most of the day today. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little story. Have a wonderful weekend.

Ron