A Treasure of Nature
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Comment from meeshu
this is a great rainbow poem. the verses are very smooth and the last verse is especially poignant. this one of the best rainbow poems I've read.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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this is a great rainbow poem. the verses are very smooth and the last verse is especially poignant. this one of the best rainbow poems I've read.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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many thanks! much appreciated.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, no details with this prompt entry for the rainbow, best of luck. The picture is so vibrant when you come into your poem. And the words don't disappoint, full of awe and joy, what's not to like about that?
I didn't notice any errors, and it was a joy to review, Ana:)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Hello, no details with this prompt entry for the rainbow, best of luck. The picture is so vibrant when you come into your poem. And the words don't disappoint, full of awe and joy, what's not to like about that?
I didn't notice any errors, and it was a joy to review, Ana:)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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many thanks! much appreciated.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an excellent entry for the 'A Rainbow' writing prompt contest. It is nicely rhymed to describe the feeling of awe when the blessing of a rainbow is sighted. I love to see them and have been known to chase them in my car to catch a better glimpse. Smiles made in heaven! Thank you for this most enjoyable read and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is an excellent entry for the 'A Rainbow' writing prompt contest. It is nicely rhymed to describe the feeling of awe when the blessing of a rainbow is sighted. I love to see them and have been known to chase them in my car to catch a better glimpse. Smiles made in heaven! Thank you for this most enjoyable read and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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well thank you. your "smiles made in Heaven" is very good. (wish I'd thought of it) :)
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I better patent it quick! ; -) ~DD
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:)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Rainbow' writing prompt.
Your fun verse speaks of rainbows and hope.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Rainbow' writing prompt.
Your fun verse speaks of rainbows and hope.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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many thanks!
Comment from Katya
This poem is so child-like and sweet and fresh itself. It would make a nice book for very young children. I feel good having read it. Thank you very much.
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This poem is so child-like and sweet and fresh itself. It would make a nice book for very young children. I feel good having read it. Thank you very much.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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thank you very much! I do write for children - still one, myself.
