Does This Suggest?
The signs of Spring--a kyrielle36 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes, it is here even at times it does not feel like it. When Robins appear they are a good sigh that spring has arrived. Hope you do well in the contest. The photo is lovely.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Yes, it is here even at times it does not feel like it. When Robins appear they are a good sigh that spring has arrived. Hope you do well in the contest. The photo is lovely.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Thank you for sharing my spring kyrielle, Ben. I just spotted two robins on my front lawn. I hope that bodes well for the contest.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer you may have something here perhaps spring is in the air out so it away with all these different signs. Nice poem easy to read and I love the way you presented your stanzas. Very good presentation and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Writer you may have something here perhaps spring is in the air out so it away with all these different signs. Nice poem easy to read and I love the way you presented your stanzas. Very good presentation and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Thank you for sharing my spring kyrielle, Mary, and your kind praise..
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My pleasure.
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, the weeds will soon be here - but I will take that instead of the snow! It's been a long, snowy winter here in New England. I am ready for spring. So I hope the robins stay and frolic. We are ready! Enjoyed your kyrielle.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Yes, the weeds will soon be here - but I will take that instead of the snow! It's been a long, snowy winter here in New England. I am ready for spring. So I hope the robins stay and frolic. We are ready! Enjoyed your kyrielle.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my spring kyrielle, June. My heart goes out to you New Englsnders who suffered all those storms just recently. I do hope spring comes soon for you.
Comment from Boogienights
It does indeed suggest that spring is here, as your poem suggests that you are skilled at the art of poetry. I love this and it follows the guidelines set forth in the contest. You describe spring in such a way that makes me impatient for it to come( we just got 3 inches of snow in Minnesota.) thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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It does indeed suggest that spring is here, as your poem suggests that you are skilled at the art of poetry. I love this and it follows the guidelines set forth in the contest. You describe spring in such a way that makes me impatient for it to come( we just got 3 inches of snow in Minnesota.) thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I commiserate with you folks in Minnesota. I also truly appreciate your sharing my spring poem and your very kind praise.
Comment from Artasylum
These Eastery colors are delicious... the words are perfect pitch. presentation great. Sadly, the good must stand with the bad. Hopefully the good will win... it can!... thanks for the read. yours, diana
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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These Eastery colors are delicious... the words are perfect pitch. presentation great. Sadly, the good must stand with the bad. Hopefully the good will win... it can!... thanks for the read. yours, diana
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Diana, for sharing my spring poem and the great review.
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a well-written poem, and a great entry for the Kyrielle contest- in my opinion. Your words depict the arrival of spring really nicely, and they paint a lovely picture in my mind. The picture you chose to display with the poem is very appealing too! Great work :)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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This is a well-written poem, and a great entry for the Kyrielle contest- in my opinion. Your words depict the arrival of spring really nicely, and they paint a lovely picture in my mind. The picture you chose to display with the poem is very appealing too! Great work :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my poem and the artwork, Fabiha. Thank you for your very kind praise.
Comment from zanya
Hope shines through this rhythmic and delightful Kyrielle as it casts a glance at the possible signs of Spring emerging 'two robins hop with jaunty cheer'- captures precisely the movement of the robin around the garden
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Hope shines through this rhythmic and delightful Kyrielle as it casts a glance at the possible signs of Spring emerging 'two robins hop with jaunty cheer'- captures precisely the movement of the robin around the garden
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I am delighted you like my characterization of the hopping robins. Thanks so much, zanya, for sharing my spring poem.
Comment from Harry Smith
Beautifully written is the poem with lots of imagery and the picture selection is outstanding and went perfectly with the poem. The reader really enjoyed this poem. Outstanding work!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Beautifully written is the poem with lots of imagery and the picture selection is outstanding and went perfectly with the poem. The reader really enjoyed this poem. Outstanding work!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, Harry, for the great review of my spring poem.
Comment from Swampfox1
Great Job. Good luck in the contest. I like the play on the Robins. Does it mean that Spring is near. In the South, such as Louisiana they used to arrive in late January, during the hardest part of winter. But our winters are like the springs up North, most of the time. But I haven't seen a Robin in a long time, quite a few years. I like your poem , I think it is well done. It flows well. Signs of Spring being near. Cool!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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Great Job. Good luck in the contest. I like the play on the Robins. Does it mean that Spring is near. In the South, such as Louisiana they used to arrive in late January, during the hardest part of winter. But our winters are like the springs up North, most of the time. But I haven't seen a Robin in a long time, quite a few years. I like your poem , I think it is well done. It flows well. Signs of Spring being near. Cool!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I truly appreciate your sharing my poem, Swampfox, and your interesting comments about robins in the South.
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No problem. I wonder why they don't go West?
Comment from jdrhye
I hope it does mean spring is near...very weary of winter. Nicely articulated. I enjoy the sort of sing song of this style of poetry. The flow, and rhythm are good. It is a easy read one most everyone who experiences winter can relate to.
J
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I hope it does mean spring is near...very weary of winter. Nicely articulated. I enjoy the sort of sing song of this style of poetry. The flow, and rhythm are good. It is a easy read one most everyone who experiences winter can relate to.
J
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
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I, too, am impatient for Spring?s REAL arrival. Thank you so much, J, for sharing my spring poem and your kind praise.