Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

A bit of humor for the start of a new week sliding down the page in poetic lierosity. Just a word I added to our edictionary. LOL
Well done

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Other than mulierosity, I can?t find a definition for it.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I love these jellyfish poems, they are so fun and clever...makes me wonder what the next world will be that you enter, thanks for sharing your wit with us readers. I also like the artwork and pictures you include.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks, BN

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I'm not certain, Bill, but there seems to be something
missing from the first line.
It doesn't rhyme with lines 2 and five--unless I'm missing something.
Am I?

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Yes. The improbable t? is the last sound on line one.

fish t?
wished
squished

reply by humpwhistle on 26-Mar-2018

Sorry, Bill, I must be dense. I still don't get it. What's the improbable t', and what does it sound like?

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Once there was a jellyfish that ...
Once there was a jellyfish tha...
Once there was a jellyfish th...
Once there was a jellyfish t? (should sound like jellyfished

Its imperfection and inane usage makes me happy.

reply by humpwhistle on 26-Mar-2018

More power to you, Bill. Don't mind me. Everyone else gets it. I must have slept on brick last night. L

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

Good work, with excellent visuals and touches. Recommend these changes, because the t', while poetic is distracting, readers will wander from your work seeking an answer. Delete the t', change ... wished to wish.
End up with ... he went squish.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you, Henry, for the good suggestion. Part of my charm is my taking pains to make words rhyme in the worst ways. This is exhibit Z.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This!was a well written poem about jellyfish.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks, Ricky

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

It sounded a bit choppy, but it worked. Your message was clear, the jellyfish got his in the end, but could no longer grant wishes. Who wants wishes with a price anyway. Great picture and your limerick brightened my day, so it gets a thumbs up.

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks, Jaded

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh, that is one gorgeous jellyfish. I like your limerick which reads well. The limerick form is one that, I think, works well with your playful animal themes. Because of a few stung fingers whoever squished the jellyfish killed the golden 'goose' that supplied the wishes. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks, Marilyn, for giving this a look. Bill