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Comment from Harry Smith
Bill where do you find the outstanding pictures that compliment your work and gives it the energy needed. The imagery is outstanding in this short poem. Good Job.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
Bill where do you find the outstanding pictures that compliment your work and gives it the energy needed. The imagery is outstanding in this short poem. Good Job.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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I go to Google and type in shrew pix.
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Thanks so much for the info.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Terrific limerick and the photo is awesome. I never saw a shrew close up. I guess he uses his nose to dig with. I wonder if youtube has video of a shrew in action. I have to look. Hope so. :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
Terrific limerick and the photo is awesome. I never saw a shrew close up. I guess he uses his nose to dig with. I wonder if youtube has video of a shrew in action. I have to look. Hope so. :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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I think the nose finds the worms it likes.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how ignorantly we think of something as we wish to think for satisfaction and change our attitude and environment; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
This speaks how ignorantly we think of something as we wish to think for satisfaction and change our attitude and environment; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from c_lucas
Man will always battle the rodents of life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
Man will always battle the rodents of life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Charlie.
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from jaded831
Lol fun. Your limerick made me laugh before my morning coffee, which is a hard thing to do. The picture works well with your poem, both made me laugh. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
Lol fun. Your limerick made me laugh before my morning coffee, which is a hard thing to do. The picture works well with your poem, both made me laugh. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Jaded, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!!! You always manage to find the fun in these poems, that's why I enjoy them so much. This one is so funny, and the picture is wonderful. Well done again, Bill! :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
LOL!!! You always manage to find the fun in these poems, that's why I enjoy them so much. This one is so funny, and the picture is wonderful. Well done again, Bill! :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sandra. I'm done with shrew and need something new.
Comment from judiverse
Very clever. Great pun at the end. Excellent rhyme and flow for the limerick format. Great details about the shrew's eating and not quitting. Seeing the whole world as a stew is funny. That's a frightening looking little beast in the picture. You must be really shrewd to think of so many things to write about shrews. judi
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
Very clever. Great pun at the end. Excellent rhyme and flow for the limerick format. Great details about the shrew's eating and not quitting. Seeing the whole world as a stew is funny. That's a frightening looking little beast in the picture. You must be really shrewd to think of so many things to write about shrews. judi
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Judi. Have to go on to something else now. Any ideas?
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You're welcome. You could write about a shrewd shrew. Maybe a financial genius. judi
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I'm shrew with through. Need anudder nanimal.