Ever My Truelove
A Valentine's Day Acrostic for My Husband18 total reviews
Comment from Quoiky
Loved it!
What an awesome way to show your love...and to find out your married name is 'Truelove'... that is really great.
I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
Loved it!
What an awesome way to show your love...and to find out your married name is 'Truelove'... that is really great.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello Quoiky!
Never in a million years would I have thought that I would not only marry my truelove but become a "Truelove!"
Thank you for your exceptional rating; it is deeply appreciated!
diane
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh, I love this. It is so well done and a testimonial to TrueLove. =} These days 40yrs is a very long time. So many barely make it to 5. Congratulations and I hope you and your TrueLove have a very Happy Valentines Day.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
Oh, I love this. It is so well done and a testimonial to TrueLove. =} These days 40yrs is a very long time. So many barely make it to 5. Congratulations and I hope you and your TrueLove have a very Happy Valentines Day.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello Roxanna!
Thank you for your thoughtful review! Seems like yesterday that my husband and I met! We are very lucky!
Happy Valentine's Day!
diane
Comment from Sherman541
Beautiful poem. It is always refreshing to see people who have been together for so long still so much in love. This is a very lovely written poem. A very beautiful picture too. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
Beautiful poem. It is always refreshing to see people who have been together for so long still so much in love. This is a very lovely written poem. A very beautiful picture too. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello Sherman541!
We still have so much fun!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Happy Truelove Day!
diane
Comment from LIJ Red
Ah, a pun (Obligatory groan). I imagine Evil Eddie the editing gremlin put the linefeeds in there and broke up the acrostic letters(I know, with the boldface letters it doesn't matter.) Looks like an excellent acrostic to me.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
Ah, a pun (Obligatory groan). I imagine Evil Eddie the editing gremlin put the linefeeds in there and broke up the acrostic letters(I know, with the boldface letters it doesn't matter.) Looks like an excellent acrostic to me.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello LIJRed!
Oh...it didn't translate appropriately on your screen? Sometime when I am reading a verse on my phone, the same things happens...
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Happy Valentine's Day!
diane
Comment from Gloria ....
A lovely acrostic, Diane. You've touched on the main components of love and commitment and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Great job my friend.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
A lovely acrostic, Diane. You've touched on the main components of love and commitment and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Great job my friend.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello Gloria!
Much appreciated.
Haven't attempted one of these in years!
Happy Truelove Day!
diane
Comment from robyn corum
KT,
That is definitely one very cool name, my friend.
And a cool acrostic to match. Sounds like you've been a very lucky lady in love -- good for you!! I wish you many, many more years of such delight AND good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
KT,
That is definitely one very cool name, my friend.
And a cool acrostic to match. Sounds like you've been a very lucky lady in love -- good for you!! I wish you many, many more years of such delight AND good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hi robyn,
It truly is "one very cool name!"
Thank you for your thoughtful and kind review. I am a very lucky lady!
diane
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic Valentine poem, To My TRUELOVE, follows the vertical theme and reveals a successful relationship and a still bright future. The poem broadens as it builds downward and gives that sense of expansion and depth. Nice.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
This acrostic Valentine poem, To My TRUELOVE, follows the vertical theme and reveals a successful relationship and a still bright future. The poem broadens as it builds downward and gives that sense of expansion and depth. Nice.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello Bill!
Thank you for your excellent review! We are truly fortunate...and a little bit lucky!
diane
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a lovely, romantic poem. Those sunset images are particularly hitting home with me these days. Anyway, I really like your acrostic. I checked the transitions to see how it flows as one continuous poem. I saw nothing that I would change. Good luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
What a lovely, romantic poem. Those sunset images are particularly hitting home with me these days. Anyway, I really like your acrostic. I checked the transitions to see how it flows as one continuous poem. I saw nothing that I would change. Good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Hello Debbie!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
diane