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Comment from Gloria ....
I didn't know cockroaches are thieves but it figures. Of course that's what you need to find a bug and shizzy.
Are they unionized at all? That might be a problem.
Great good fun and totally unique, Bill. Now we know what the Girl Guide cookie boxes are for.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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I didn't know cockroaches are thieves but it figures. Of course that's what you need to find a bug and shizzy.
Are they unionized at all? That might be a problem.
Great good fun and totally unique, Bill. Now we know what the Girl Guide cookie boxes are for.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Roaches are working through the Beetles United Group or BUG
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written poem about the good for something cockroach. I never knew they were really good for anything until now. Thanks for posting. Great words and love colors and imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri
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This is a very cute and well written poem about the good for something cockroach. I never knew they were really good for anything until now. Thanks for posting. Great words and love colors and imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
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Cockroaches are good as a food source if one is extremely desperate.
Comment from MsPetra
This offering is very witty. Well done on that regard. Though I don't like and am allergic to cockroaches I like this piece a lot. I will probably share it with someone. Of course I will give you your credit.
I didn't see anything that needs fixing.
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This offering is very witty. Well done on that regard. Though I don't like and am allergic to cockroaches I like this piece a lot. I will probably share it with someone. Of course I will give you your credit.
I didn't see anything that needs fixing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks, MsPetra for giving this such a stellar review. Bill
Comment from Ella Gott
Nice job Bill! Your poems are super fun to read and I love being able to show my little brother your fun posts! Also thank you so much for your friendly feedback, It means a lot!
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Nice job Bill! Your poems are super fun to read and I love being able to show my little brother your fun posts! Also thank you so much for your friendly feedback, It means a lot!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Ella, for the very nice review. Bill
Comment from emptypage
Ummm... Bill, I'm no computer geek, not even close to good with technology (though I'm teachable), but this I do not understand.
The rhythm of the poem is great, and it reads even;y except for the last line of the first verse, but I don't have a clue what you're talking about!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Ummm... Bill, I'm no computer geek, not even close to good with technology (though I'm teachable), but this I do not understand.
The rhythm of the poem is great, and it reads even;y except for the last line of the first verse, but I don't have a clue what you're talking about!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Pretend I'm Donald Trump telling you all I know about foreign policy. Then take this information with the same level of credibility.
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Ahhh... now I feel stupid. LOL.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Are you sure you're off the booze, Bill? I've never of a "Geek Squad roach." And I can't figure out the "kookyland spastic" but it's fun to say and rhymes with plastic. And I don't think anything that large should be able to get inside the computer.
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Lol! Are you sure you're off the booze, Bill? I've never of a "Geek Squad roach." And I can't figure out the "kookyland spastic" but it's fun to say and rhymes with plastic. And I don't think anything that large should be able to get inside the computer.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
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Let's pretend that I don't drink, that the Geek Squad is a profession tech troubleshooting company, that kookyland spastic is a frenetic frantic state, and that roaches can crawl through a dime-sized slit. Then, let's make all that true.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Somehow I knew this was headed toward computer bugs. What about viruses? Do you have any suggestions? By the way, my son told me that roaches taste like bitter dates.
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Somehow I knew this was headed toward computer bugs. What about viruses? Do you have any suggestions? By the way, my son told me that roaches taste like bitter dates.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
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Need to keep those dates happy.