I and my husband, Robert
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "I send you many kisses."A prayer, then the walk through our marriage.
31 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three line poem. We end up in bed together after many kisses and we stay together until death part us in this life and we meet again on the other side.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
A very well-written three line poem. We end up in bed together after many kisses and we stay together until death part us in this life and we meet again on the other side.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from Rasmine
Robina, :)
Hello. I like this. I wish you luck in the competition. Keep on writing! It's so therapeutic. I wrote a lot about when I was abused in my earlier life -- it helped a lot to flush out the pain.
:)
Love,
Nome
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
Robina, :)
Hello. I like this. I wish you luck in the competition. Keep on writing! It's so therapeutic. I wrote a lot about when I was abused in my earlier life -- it helped a lot to flush out the pain.
:)
Love,
Nome
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week. I think it does.
Comment from judiverse
This is sad. The loneliness comes through. The thought of sending kisses sound like a comforting thought. Although you say forever, the connection is still there. Memories are around to bring the departed loved one close. Your syllable count is right on, and best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
This is sad. The loneliness comes through. The thought of sending kisses sound like a comforting thought. Although you say forever, the connection is still there. Memories are around to bring the departed loved one close. Your syllable count is right on, and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Ine, it's not an easy time you're going trough at the moment, but I think you expressed it very well in this short poem.Very well done. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
Hi Ine, it's not an easy time you're going trough at the moment, but I think you expressed it very well in this short poem.Very well done. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an interestin entry for the 3 Line Poetry writing prompt.
Well written and well said. The picture is a good match.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
I think this is an interestin entry for the 3 Line Poetry writing prompt.
Well written and well said. The picture is a good match.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Dutchie
I like this poem . The photo is scary and the poem so beautiful.
Life is a matter of time, but your love for Robert is forever.
He'will Always be in your heart and in your mind. You expressed it very well. Fia
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
I like this poem . The photo is scary and the poem so beautiful.
Life is a matter of time, but your love for Robert is forever.
He'will Always be in your heart and in your mind. You expressed it very well. Fia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your review, Ine. Have a nice week. And yes, I love him forever. I posted the rhyming one too: GHOSTS.
Comment from c_lucas
I know Love can cross the veil, but I am not sure kisses can. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
I know Love can cross the veil, but I am not sure kisses can. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from misscookie
The photo you used with your poem kind a shook me up.
Than I read you deep emotional poem Those three line said enough.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
The photo you used with your poem kind a shook me up.
Than I read you deep emotional poem Those three line said enough.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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You're very welcome and a I wish you the same have a nice week.
Cookie
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ine. This is so sad and yet so beautiful too. It's sweet and the imagery is delightful. I love how you tell of your love in so few words, but the feelings are all there. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
Hi Ine. This is so sad and yet so beautiful too. It's sweet and the imagery is delightful. I love how you tell of your love in so few words, but the feelings are all there. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Robina
I hope Dean Kuch reads your Horror and Thriller 5-7-5 poem
I like it how well your pix and words connect so well
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
Hello Robina
I hope Dean Kuch reads your Horror and Thriller 5-7-5 poem
I like it how well your pix and words connect so well
Gert
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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You are welcome Robina
Gert