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Animal poetry and short stories
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Comment from
BeasPeas
I wonder how obscenely big (speaking in amoeba size) that will be. Your mind is working overtime and I like it. There are no dust bunnies in your brain. Marilyn
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
Thanks, Marilyn. They can grow to 1.4 inches near the ocean bottom.
Comment from
lyenochka
Yes, I guess size is relative! Good use of assonance (be seen, be obscenely) and you had me wondering so I looked it up and yes, I think 5mm would be "obscenely" big for an amoeba!
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
Thanks, lyenochka, for keeping my science credible. Amoeba slow, but I'm sure.
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