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How I discovered Santa21 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing the story of your Secret Santa in this spiritual poem. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and the reminder of the real meaning of Christmas. Have a joyful celebration and a peaceful, new year- Joan
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Thank you for sharing the story of your Secret Santa in this spiritual poem. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and the reminder of the real meaning of Christmas. Have a joyful celebration and a peaceful, new year- Joan
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written story you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written story you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
Comment from Ricky1024
Bearpaw improve my dear is Well written kitchen team as well as imagery it flowed well read well with no grammar issue so to speak objective as well as objective conference were both online and in perfect condition there along with the descriptive measures which complimented this thanks for the home and have a wonderful holiday talk to Ricky
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Bearpaw improve my dear is Well written kitchen team as well as imagery it flowed well read well with no grammar issue so to speak objective as well as objective conference were both online and in perfect condition there along with the descriptive measures which complimented this thanks for the home and have a wonderful holiday talk to Ricky
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
'And every year we worry not,
for we found out that day,
that Jesus will take care of us
because of Christmas Day. '
A beautiful poem based around a real story...wow, as I have read on the site this year and illustrated beautifully too, Christmas miracles CAN happen. Wonderful work kindest regards and seasons greetings God bless you Meia xx
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'And every year we worry not,
for we found out that day,
that Jesus will take care of us
because of Christmas Day. '
A beautiful poem based around a real story...wow, as I have read on the site this year and illustrated beautifully too, Christmas miracles CAN happen. Wonderful work kindest regards and seasons greetings God bless you Meia xx
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
Comment from Lucian Carter
Thank Santa, thank Jesus, heck thank Sponge Bob, that there are decent people in the world. That charity lives on in some people's hearts and minds.
This is a great poem of a true story and I really enjoyed it, both the downs and the ups. Wishing you and yours the best of the season!
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Thank Santa, thank Jesus, heck thank Sponge Bob, that there are decent people in the world. That charity lives on in some people's hearts and minds.
This is a great poem of a true story and I really enjoyed it, both the downs and the ups. Wishing you and yours the best of the season!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
Comment from loismddavis
a nice rhyming Christmas poem with an appropriate picture and seasonal color. I liked your little poem as it told a complete story that had a ring of truth-mysterious things sometimes happen at the holidays
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a nice rhyming Christmas poem with an appropriate picture and seasonal color. I liked your little poem as it told a complete story that had a ring of truth-mysterious things sometimes happen at the holidays
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 'Christmas Poetry' writing prompt.
Well told and the picture is a good match.
Nicely done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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This is a good entry for the 'Christmas Poetry' writing prompt.
Well told and the picture is a good match.
Nicely done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This poem is brilliant-the rhyme, the rhythm, the joyful story and cheery red Christmas atmosphere! I'm so glad you realized where all blessings come from, and that you've retained this positive theme in your life. I wish you continued blessings this Christmas and always. Brenda.
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This poem is brilliant-the rhyme, the rhythm, the joyful story and cheery red Christmas atmosphere! I'm so glad you realized where all blessings come from, and that you've retained this positive theme in your life. I wish you continued blessings this Christmas and always. Brenda.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Miracles DO happen even today, Lois.
At least I believe that to be true.
They may be small and go relatively unnoticed. But the recipients and the beneficiaries of these miracles don't think they're all that small.
Like the two bicycles that showed up of of the blue for you one Christmas day.
Lovely poem, very well written.
Thanks so much for sharing it with us all.
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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Miracles DO happen even today, Lois.
At least I believe that to be true.
They may be small and go relatively unnoticed. But the recipients and the beneficiaries of these miracles don't think they're all that small.
Like the two bicycles that showed up of of the blue for you one Christmas day.
Lovely poem, very well written.
Thanks so much for sharing it with us all.
Merry Christmas to you and your family.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017
Comment from patcelaw
Lois, this is a lovely poem for the Christmas poetry contest. It speaks well of the magic associated with Christmas. We had years as we were raising out family that there was not much money for gifts, but was always managed to have some special gifts for each of the girls. They were not as expensive as are the techno gifts of today.
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Lois, this is a lovely poem for the Christmas poetry contest. It speaks well of the magic associated with Christmas. We had years as we were raising out family that there was not much money for gifts, but was always managed to have some special gifts for each of the girls. They were not as expensive as are the techno gifts of today.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2017