Miscellaneous Poems Vol 2
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. We are not the only species on earth who wish to be free and have a peaceful life. We are the only ones who can speak for ourselves while we keep other species in captivity.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. We are not the only species on earth who wish to be free and have a peaceful life. We are the only ones who can speak for ourselves while we keep other species in captivity.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, for the kind comments. Your support is much appreciated. Craig
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks of peace and living a non-violent life, enjoying peace as a right is universal, even killing animals for dinner is violence; everyone has a right to live free; I like. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks of peace and living a non-violent life, enjoying peace as a right is universal, even killing animals for dinner is violence; everyone has a right to live free; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, much appreciated - Craig
Comment from Lucian Carter
I want to tear the message apart; but it's the poem that matters.
This is a good poem. It follows the format well, thus is a good fit for the contest.
The message is expressed well, so I think this poem hit exactly what it was aiming for.
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I want to tear the message apart; but it's the poem that matters.
This is a good poem. It follows the format well, thus is a good fit for the contest.
The message is expressed well, so I think this poem hit exactly what it was aiming for.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Ah, well thanks for not taking your distaste for the message out on the scoreboard. And I'm glad to know I didn't miss the mark. Many thanks, Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not guilty! I'm vegetarian! But I reget to say there are many who aren't and cows only have peace in parts of India, a poignant write here, lvoe Dolly x
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Not guilty! I'm vegetarian! But I reget to say there are many who aren't and cows only have peace in parts of India, a poignant write here, lvoe Dolly x
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Well let me congratulate you on your choice :) Also, thanks for the kind words - much appreciated. Craig
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. Your content speaks for all creatures great and small which should stand you in good stead with the judges. All the best in the contest and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. Your content speaks for all creatures great and small which should stand you in good stead with the judges. All the best in the contest and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the kind comments - they're gratefully received :) Craig