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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Bill: Well, well, well, I guess that since I have just become your fan, I am confused with this story. (lol) I must be coming well into the middle of it but I shall go to your portfolio to find the beginning of it, to follow it up to this point. It is interesting though as I don understand the story line from what I have read. it is great to see your work in my notifications. I look forward to reading your work. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Good morning, Bill: Well, well, well, I guess that since I have just become your fan, I am confused with this story. (lol) I must be coming well into the middle of it but I shall go to your portfolio to find the beginning of it, to follow it up to this point. It is interesting though as I don understand the story line from what I have read. it is great to see your work in my notifications. I look forward to reading your work. Have a great day!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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It starts in Aardvark World 6. It is just for laughs. The next installment will bring the story to a close.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Splutonian? I am intrigued as I cannot decipher this one LOL. I wonder if medical insurance covered all this elective surgery. It now has me thinking what animal I'd want to become ... too much effort to think at this time of day. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Splutonian? I am intrigued as I cannot decipher this one LOL. I wonder if medical insurance covered all this elective surgery. It now has me thinking what animal I'd want to become ... too much effort to think at this time of day. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Rationalizing fantasy could lead to a long and winding road.
Comment from Spitfire
His little grin broadened until it looked like dice in a shaker cup.-- super simile.
Sounds as if the Aardvark may be a spy.
Is this a spoof on transgenders? LOL
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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His little grin broadened until it looked like dice in a shaker cup.-- super simile.
Sounds as if the Aardvark may be a spy.
Is this a spoof on transgenders? LOL
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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It might be NOW.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a funny and humorous story about future generations, I like.
I enjoyed the dialogues, original diction, tough and time consuming.
I liked the concept.
DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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This is a funny and humorous story about future generations, I like.
I enjoyed the dialogues, original diction, tough and time consuming.
I liked the concept.
DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! A Splutonian? Is the aardvark trying to be cool and making that up, or is he really from another planet. With all the disguises and cheating going on, it's likely. I love how hte mink is named Lion and is really a walrus. I can't type cuz I'm laughng with my keyboard on my lap and it's bouncing around. LOL
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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LOL! A Splutonian? Is the aardvark trying to be cool and making that up, or is he really from another planet. With all the disguises and cheating going on, it's likely. I love how hte mink is named Lion and is really a walrus. I can't type cuz I'm laughng with my keyboard on my lap and it's bouncing around. LOL
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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I'm so glad you like this, Phyllis. It's fun to see where it goes.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Oh no, he's also a shape-shifter. Not really understanding the simile of a "smile" broadening to look like "dice in a shaker cup." Perhaps a picture should help? Now we can't believe him that he was hungry at the mention of ants and grasshoppers.
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Lol. Oh no, he's also a shape-shifter. Not really understanding the simile of a "smile" broadening to look like "dice in a shaker cup." Perhaps a picture should help? Now we can't believe him that he was hungry at the mention of ants and grasshoppers.
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
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"dice in a shaker cup" I was thinking of a Yahtzee cup with five dice in it. Is that not a well-known image? Aardvark may not be lying about the insects. I might be lying.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is so cute. You are quite the linguist, Bill. I was LOL as I read this clever chapter to your story.
"Aardvark: Slet me gedth sith sathrate - - Captain Lion ith a human named Thmith? Lieutenant Minx ith akthually a walruth naimt Slion?"
Marilyn
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This is so cute. You are quite the linguist, Bill. I was LOL as I read this clever chapter to your story.
"Aardvark: Slet me gedth sith sathrate - - Captain Lion ith a human named Thmith? Lieutenant Minx ith akthually a walruth naimt Slion?"
Marilyn
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Marilyn. I should be able to wrap this up in Aardvark World 10