Comment from michaelcahill

Exceptional

HAAAAAAAAHAHAHA!!! I write thousand word posts trying to say this very thing in the forest. I've got to give this brevity thing a try. Do I have to be smart too? That might be a problem. LOL
LOVE this. Right on the money. I hope the committee is sharp and gets this. I think it could win unless they're all what we suspect they might be. :)) mike

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Well, if it doesn't Mikey, I'll just put it down to a nefarious plot, no doubt cooked up by Hilary :) Seriously, I don't think it has a snowflake's chance in hell, but shhhhhhh..... they may be listening!

Smart is not a prerequisite - I hope! Thanks so much, you're far too kind. (But I'm taking the shiny six and running, before you change your mind).

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry for the Short Poem poetry contest. You made good use of the twenty allowed syllables. I enjoyed the irreverent tribute to those suffering from mental illness,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Oh goodness. Honestly, the last thing I'd want to do is poke fun at someone who had a genuine mental disorder. This was more commenting on how otherwise sane people can be persuaded to believe the most outrageous nonsense. Thanks for reviewing :) Craig