Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! I'm not really sure how to take this. He feared for the judgment of the writing contest committee but the irony was that God was the One to be most feared and apparently had the last word.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

'shone' above his writing desk.

Bill I really liked this . I don't know if it was a sarcastic way of saying that for some reason it seems that most Fanstorian poets being American and predominantly religion have to feel compelled to always mention God in their writes somewhere near the end usually.
I am not a religious man but I completely respect anyones belief and faith. But I don't want it referenced to me in every write they do. just my thoughts
Thanks for sharing

dip

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thanks, Doc, for the homophobe reminder.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I think this has some truth to it. There are several buzz words that seem to carry a lot of weight or NOT these days. Good job with your little story and you have included God in it so you're safe. Marilyn

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thanks, Marilyn