Reviews from

Selections For Book Project

Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "With Love for Katy"
possible selections for inclusion in book project

23 total reviews 
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello Michael. I would have never gotten it out. I can't read my own "Strong Enough to Get it Done" without balling like a whimpering baby. I thought you did a beautiful job both in song and verse. So damn sorry for your loss of friend. xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Hey, Deborah

    I just take a deep breath and write. It's kind of a drag being the poet sometimes, yes? Oh well, it's usually kind of cool though.
    Thanks so much. I'm pleased I did her some justice. A nice gal. mike
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

you go and give it all you have in honor of her life and passing. Excellent piece in honor of the memory and something we dare not forget. Nicely done. Will you read this? I hope so.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    I'll probably read it and sing too I'm guessing. I get drug up before people A LOT. LOL At least they never hang me like I'm expecting.
    So pleased you thought this was worthy. Thanks so much, dear friend. mike
Comment from nancyjam
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Michael, I am so sorry for the loss of your friend. Your poem is
a loving tribute to her. A beautiful tribute.
I'm sure she is at peace and smiling down on you.
Nancy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    How lovely to hear. Thanks for the sweet words, Nancy. mike
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hello, Michael,

This is a sweet poem for your friend Katy, who passed away. You are a loving soul. I really like the free verse poem is melancholic and beautiful. Well done, honey.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Hi, Ms. Gypsy

    Thanks so much. I hope this is the last for a while. I'm so glad you liked and thought it worthy. Thanks so much. hugs, mike
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I am so glad Katy had you in her life. I am sure she appreciated it. I can tell from your poem that she was a wonderful person. Thank you for sharing your song with us and with Katy and Tonnie.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Thanks a million, Barbara, for the kind words and ALL of your support that I'm not as good at responding to as I should be. I do read and smile with every lovely word. mike
Comment from DR DIP
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I never knew robert plant sang the rose? I always thought you looked like robert plant.

Lovely tribute Michael Through the crackles I can hear a very nice voice. Thanks so much for sharing your tribute to your dear friend,

dip

All that's left is a single rose
A fond memory of the past
The greatest memory when love grows
Knowing it will always last

A single rose is all that's left
To remind me of our love
This sad sight, leaves me bereft
You are all I'm thinking of

I'll never pick that single rose
Your fragrance reminds me of you
My only memory I suppose
Of when I said I do

Now your gone and left me now
Loneliness spreads its cloud
But I make this solemn vow
A single tear is still allowed

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Someone stuck an old cassette recorder out when I sang at another funeral. :)) Thus, the poor quality. I MUST figure out how to do some decent recording. BUT, I'm pleased you found this worthy and I thank you for your kind words and support.

    Hey, you're posting the great poem, yes? Or have you already? Great piece. mike
reply by DR DIP on 06-Oct-2017
    I posted it yesterday and dedicated the inspiration from your poem. I hope you didn't mind

    dip
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Oh, of course not, I'm honoured. Thanks, mike
Comment from Joy Graham
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a delightful tribute to Katy. She is blessed to have you to remember her. You have lost two friends in the last little while. I'm so sorry and offer you my deepest condolence. You are a caring and valued friend to those that need you.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Joy, for the sweet words, very comforting and appreciated. Yes, she was a dear gal. Nice is not common these days.
    I'm hoping that's the last of these for a while. mike
Comment from sandy montgomery
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

My heart goes out to you on your loss. This piece is emotive. Excellent because for me it does all I want from good poetry. It was beautiful, clear, poignant. It made me think and feel. It introduced me to someone elses experiences in a way I could relate to. It gave me a glimpse into the beautiful soul of the author. It contained no spag. It is a piece I will remember. One I want to remember. Thank you for sharing this piece.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Wow. Such truly lovely thoughts and kind words, Sandy. I'm so pleased you hold this in such high regard. This is one of those that's a little more important than some of the others. I delighted you find it worthy. Thanks so much, my friend. mike
Comment from Teri7
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is such a sad write you have done about your friend Katy. You used very good and heartfelt wording. The art work you chose was great too. I wish I could listen to what you have on here but I can't right now. My speakers don't work. May God bless you Mike! Teri

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much, Teri. I'm so pleased you enjoyed. The song sounds just like Bette Midler EXCEPT it isn't anywhere near as good. HAHAHA!!!! Blessings to you as well, mike
Comment from nordicgirl
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Oh, Michael, not again. I am so sorry for your loss. I know these things hit you harder than you let on. This is touching and beautiful. Your friend would most honored. Pleas be smart and do what the doctors are telling you, okay. I hate telling you this, but you mean a lot to me and a lot of other people. Hehehe. I never thought I would lecture you. Take care. NG

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    Doctors? What do they know? Okay, I know, I know. Don't worry. You sound like my mommy. Whew ... kinda hot. LOL Should we finally risk our friendship. Cool how inappropriate I can be, yes? I mean a lot to other people? Who? Anyone stacked? I mean, ahem, with a nice personality?
    Thanks woman. I'm okay. This one wasn't a surprise. Always a kind of shock, but I knew, ya know. michael