Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Barb

= Goodness, having worked for the state of AZ, I know when CPA gets involved--not a good thing.
= Sorry I've missed so much, but will try to keep up.
= Good chapter.

Cheers ... J (*<*)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017

I've missed you, but thank you for catching this post.

Comment from Curly Girly

Exceptional

Hi, Barbara
This chapter read well. I hope CPS is not going to cause any trouble. The party sounds fun--plenty of delicious treats will be on offer.
One typo spotted: (period)
Anderson nodded as he left the room
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*****
Nicole

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thank you for the catch. I have made the correction.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Do you find it more rewarding to split the chapters? Sorry I have been knee deep in finishing my novel. You still have it kid. Keep it rolling.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

I find it easier to get post on FS when I split chapters. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Well, what a great way to spend my Monday. I get to enjoy another chapter of your fine story while you make me slobber all over myself wanting a banana split bombe or banana pudding. Thanks for sharing. :-)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

LOL Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Exceptional

Yes my friend I enjoyed this part something tells me some things going to happen at the dinner party Anderson seems to have taken care of evening dresses for the ladies in his life well done again my friend regards Jill

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

I am so hungry as I am reading this all I can think of is the delicious food you describe! A fantastic chapter but then I always enjoy your work you write with fluidity and it makes for a very enjoyable read. You are one of the best writers on here I always enjoy reading your new chapters even if I don't get a chance to review although I always try to. Absolutely sensational as ever kind regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thank you for the encouraging review. I guess I enjoy food too much. LOL

Comment from Minnesota1

Excellent

I like the flow of the story and I definitely want to know more about these characters and the situation. The idea of a lavish dinner party and the conversation that occurs is in my wheelhouse so I find that element very attractive as well.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from apky

Excellent

This is excellent and moves at a fast pace.

I enjoyed it and found it entertaining. No spags that I could detect. The plot continues to race and is sprinkled with a variety of intriguing situations.

Well done.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Barbara, so a party is on its way and Anderson doesn't like it one bit, and Shana feels she doesn't belong. They have also arranged for a lawyer to help her. She's really being taken very good care of, I would say. A great chapter. Didn't find any nits. Looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

not too much going on in this instalment, other than a lengthy discourse about ice cream! lol

I think it's getting a little plodded down at the moment with seemingly incidentals. But then you know where this is going so it'll be interesting to see what becomes relevant.

G

timeframe can be one word.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017

I will see if it works or not. I had timeframe as one one and FS through a fit.