The Eidolon
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Chapter 2 - Part 3: Visitation"Family heinously murdered. The question is by who?
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Comment from doggymad
This kid is one tough nut, try as I might I can't get my head around what he has done.
Yet you have begun to portray another side to him, a softer and more vulnerable one. I am looking forward to more of this one soon
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Freda
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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This kid is one tough nut, try as I might I can't get my head around what he has done.
Yet you have begun to portray another side to him, a softer and more vulnerable one. I am looking forward to more of this one soon
hugs
Freda
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Chapter One.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.