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Comment from sandy montgomery
This is amazing. Very emotive without forcing it. Great story telling with full detail. This is so beautiful. A great device. You brought your a game to this challenge. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is amazing. Very emotive without forcing it. Great story telling with full detail. This is so beautiful. A great device. You brought your a game to this challenge. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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You're just too kind, Sandy. I'm delighted you enjoyed this. I was pleased with the idea and I'm thrilled it came across the way I wanted. Thanks a billion. mikey
Comment from Sasha
Oh my, where are the 6's when I really need one? This is absolutely superb. You grabbed me from the very beginning. Yes, too often children are seen as the hopes and dreams of the parents. I just love the progression of this. Awesome work with this one, and definitely worth of 6 stars.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Oh my, where are the 6's when I really need one? This is absolutely superb. You grabbed me from the very beginning. Yes, too often children are seen as the hopes and dreams of the parents. I just love the progression of this. Awesome work with this one, and definitely worth of 6 stars.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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You're approval will do just fine. Delighted you enjoyed. I liked the idea, so I am thrilled you think I pulled it off well.
Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from jusylee72
wow, Michael, I truly like this. Had no idea where it was going when you started but it plays well just like a beautiful, yet tragic piano concerto. I just finished a flash fiction piece about musicianship and life. Interesting. Hoping to get back to potlatch this weekend. Love my husband, but he distracts me when he is home.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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wow, Michael, I truly like this. Had no idea where it was going when you started but it plays well just like a beautiful, yet tragic piano concerto. I just finished a flash fiction piece about musicianship and life. Interesting. Hoping to get back to potlatch this weekend. Love my husband, but he distracts me when he is home.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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HAAAAAA! That's cute about your husband. I know what you mean. :))
I'm delighted you liked this. I liked the idea and I'm thrilled it came across the way I wanted. YES! I've been sick and kind of out of it lately. I'll look for your piece when I'm feeling better. Sounds most interesting. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from damommy
This is very original and unique take on the challenge.
You took us through his entire life through his hands. What a pleasure to read. You've told me a lot about yourself in this well written script. You're to be admired. 8-)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is very original and unique take on the challenge.
You took us through his entire life through his hands. What a pleasure to read. You've told me a lot about yourself in this well written script. You're to be admired. 8-)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hi, Yvonne
Just want to let you know I'm still out here! Woozy and a bit worthless, but I'll be around before long to try and get some reviewing in and stuff. I'm so thrilled you liked this. I was hoping the idea would work. YAY! mikey
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So good to hear from you. I've missed you. Yes, you did a whopping good job with the hands piece.
I'm so sorry you've been ill. I hope you're on the road to a speedy recovery soon. Take care of yourself.
Yvonne
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again you have impressed me with a wonderfully well written post. I really enjoyed reading. I wish all bullies could be eradicated, unfortunately it's cycle. I tried to inform a parent once that I had received complains that her daughter was a bully. Her answer was she's aggressive but not a bully.
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Once again you have impressed me with a wonderfully well written post. I really enjoyed reading. I wish all bullies could be eradicated, unfortunately it's cycle. I tried to inform a parent once that I had received complains that her daughter was a bully. Her answer was she's aggressive but not a bully.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from webfoot
this was enlightening, Michael. What an interesting writing form and you did an excellent job.
Thanks for giving me food for thought (in how to aim some of my writing ideas
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this was enlightening, Michael. What an interesting writing form and you did an excellent job.
Thanks for giving me food for thought (in how to aim some of my writing ideas
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Mikey!
I hope you are feeling well again. What an intriguing script. It is quite the clever way to tell the story of your hands. Kudos for the innovative approach to the challenge.
Centering the story on playing the piano was a stroke of genius. So integral to the story. Thank you for sharing the details and how they have shaped your life.
This is a great read!
Kim
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Hi Mikey!
I hope you are feeling well again. What an intriguing script. It is quite the clever way to tell the story of your hands. Kudos for the innovative approach to the challenge.
Centering the story on playing the piano was a stroke of genius. So integral to the story. Thank you for sharing the details and how they have shaped your life.
This is a great read!
Kim
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from Pantygynt
I wondered where this was going, whether he was going to end up as a virtuoso pianist or a tough guy or just an ordinary caring fllow. The muted "climax" did not seem out of place in this well told script. In performance a great deal would depend on the camera and that is the way modern film technique is going, let the pictures tell the story.
Apparently it is a hangover from the days of the silent movies when they had to. It is the way TV drama is going too. I personally prefer my stories to emerge through the dialogue but I guess I am just old fashioned. But I'm happy to be that.
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I wondered where this was going, whether he was going to end up as a virtuoso pianist or a tough guy or just an ordinary caring fllow. The muted "climax" did not seem out of place in this well told script. In performance a great deal would depend on the camera and that is the way modern film technique is going, let the pictures tell the story.
Apparently it is a hangover from the days of the silent movies when they had to. It is the way TV drama is going too. I personally prefer my stories to emerge through the dialogue but I guess I am just old fashioned. But I'm happy to be that.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Unpredictable, touching, and your setting for each scene was outstanding, Michael. This progression of hands through life is honest and intriguing.
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Unpredictable, touching, and your setting for each scene was outstanding, Michael. This progression of hands through life is honest and intriguing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
I must say, this is a surprise and a wonderful one. How unique and involving this is. I could see this so clearly. A moving story that I know to be personal and yet it is so very easy to relate to. One of yhe very best things you have written. NG
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I must say, this is a surprise and a wonderful one. How unique and involving this is. I could see this so clearly. A moving story that I know to be personal and yet it is so very easy to relate to. One of yhe very best things you have written. NG
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017