Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Thrilling Themes"a place to gather my poetic forms
23 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Trois-Par-Huit -- Another new form for me. I learn so much on this site. It looks like you completed the requirements beautifully. Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Trois-Par-Huit -- Another new form for me. I learn so much on this site. It looks like you completed the requirements beautifully. Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Dear Janet, I love the Trois-Par-Huit and it enjoyable to write. I'm glad that you thought I met the requirement. Yes, the people on this site are chock full of knowledge. Thanks for your kind words of review.
love,
jeni
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
The Trois-par-Huit is a stunning poetic style done great justice by you here Luna. I love the way this poem flows and the inclusion of your name in the poem, very clever, with all its connotations. This is fabulous, kindest regards, Meia (Laureen) x
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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The Trois-par-Huit is a stunning poetic style done great justice by you here Luna. I love the way this poem flows and the inclusion of your name in the poem, very clever, with all its connotations. This is fabulous, kindest regards, Meia (Laureen) x
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you, dear Meia, for coming back to my portfolio to support my poetic efforts. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the poem. The inclusion of my name in the poem is due to (as you probably have figured out already) the fact that Luna was the name of the goddess of the moon. I'm a cancer and have been obsessed by the moon all my life. You are so kind. Thank you.
love,
jeni
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Jeni
Love how you used The Trois-par format and yes,
(composed ) which I know is met for only when composing a song) such a wonderful poem with musical tones.
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Hello Jeni
Love how you used The Trois-par format and yes,
(composed ) which I know is met for only when composing a song) such a wonderful poem with musical tones.
Gert
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Miss Gert,
Thank you SO MUCH for the kind six-star review that you rated my poem. I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem, Gert, and look forward to the day when you post again.
love,
jeni
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Me to still working on all the poems I have written in the past 12 years to get edited so they can get printed.
Gert
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Luna: great poem with your technique of the syllable count and message.
We can fly up into the moonbeams and dream. I dream of mansions and libraries somewhere in the Heavenlies. Yes, someday, we can meet in dreams or Heaven's library. Think of all the poems we can share!!!
Luna, keep writing. You are very talented. I like the photo. You can dance with Dean and Mystic Angel 7777. God bless! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Luna: great poem with your technique of the syllable count and message.
We can fly up into the moonbeams and dream. I dream of mansions and libraries somewhere in the Heavenlies. Yes, someday, we can meet in dreams or Heaven's library. Think of all the poems we can share!!!
Luna, keep writing. You are very talented. I like the photo. You can dance with Dean and Mystic Angel 7777. God bless! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Dear flylikeaneagle,
A six-star review! I am overwhelmed, honored and grateful for you holding my poem in such high esteem. We are both dreamers, it seems. Yes, we'll share many poems in the heavenly mansions and their libraries - I look forward to it!
Your compliment is much appreciated and has made me blush, I have to admit.
Thanks again for the exceptional rating.
All my best,
jeni
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
the form was confusing but I loved the content and the flow making it mystical and magical as I always think of the night.
Very well done according to the notes
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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the form was confusing but I loved the content and the flow making it mystical and magical as I always think of the night.
Very well done according to the notes
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Yes, when I first undertook the form some years ago I thought that the form was confusing as well, but if you just map it out on paper, write down your line numbers and your corresponding syllable count and rhyme scheme it is not that bad!
Thanks for the warm review, sister.
I love you.
Jeni
Comment from winnona
A well-written poem. The well-chosen words flowed line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. This is an interesting form of poetry that you completed well.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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A well-written poem. The well-chosen words flowed line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. This is an interesting form of poetry that you completed well.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Dear winnona,
Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your support of my poetry efforts today, my friend.
yours,
jeni
Comment from rspoet
Hello Luna
It seems there is no end to poetry forms,
which is a good thing. Variety, like the stars,
shines brightly.
Your poem fits this form, the Trois-par-Huit, very well
with excellent rhymes, meter and imagery.
Perfect art work and presentation, good choice of font, too.
Very well done!
RS
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Hello Luna
It seems there is no end to poetry forms,
which is a good thing. Variety, like the stars,
shines brightly.
Your poem fits this form, the Trois-par-Huit, very well
with excellent rhymes, meter and imagery.
Perfect art work and presentation, good choice of font, too.
Very well done!
RS
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Hi, RS, and welcome back to my port!
Nope, no end to the types of poetry that can be written. It IS a good thing. I'm happy that you enjoyed this work, and invite you to return again soon!
Yours,
jeni
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver another stunning new form to learn and admire. You are just full of them LOL. This is beautifully penned and a delightful reading experience. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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You deliver another stunning new form to learn and admire. You are just full of them LOL. This is beautifully penned and a delightful reading experience. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Dear Monica, thank you for your lovely review. It warms my heart. I''m very happy for your presence and YOU.
love,
jeni
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh my! What a beautiful poem! I am so inspired to try this form now, after reading your exquisite jewel - here's another one I will be keeping on my bookshelf to study, Ms Moon-Child. Simply gorgeous!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Oh my! What a beautiful poem! I am so inspired to try this form now, after reading your exquisite jewel - here's another one I will be keeping on my bookshelf to study, Ms Moon-Child. Simply gorgeous!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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I'll wait for your version, I know it will be lovely. Feel free to bookmark any of my poems any time, and thanks for the nod to the Moonchild. That means that you are one of my good friends now! Glad you liked it! Keep the faith, sister!
love,
jeni
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I wish I was as optimistic, but thanks for the vote of confidence. Will try, :))
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It's written. Thank you, Luna - "Now Never" will be posted soon.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another superb poem, my friend, your shadow is certainly guiding you and encouraging you on. Love this one too and the script you've used. Well done! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Another superb poem, my friend, your shadow is certainly guiding you and encouraging you on. Love this one too and the script you've used. Well done! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Sandra! I'm really happy that you are coming to my port on a continuous basis, I truly appreciate your support of my writing efforts. Thanks for enjoying the poem.
love,
jeni
