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Comment from robyn corum
I'm so glad they came to the couples' aid - but then, I knew they would. 'Cause they're decent folks. *smile* Suppose that'll give those snobby people something to think about, huh?
Thanks!
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I'm so glad they came to the couples' aid - but then, I knew they would. 'Cause they're decent folks. *smile* Suppose that'll give those snobby people something to think about, huh?
Thanks!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
He's standing close to the women and puts his hand on her shoulder near her neck. The women freezes in terror. (woman)
A well written script in my estimation, but then I got a note from Tom once that my scripts weren't really scripts, so what do I know, LOL. I think you did well on this one, mikey. I hope to potlatch again next weekend with ya'all~Debbie
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He's standing close to the women and puts his hand on her shoulder near her neck. The women freezes in terror. (woman)
A well written script in my estimation, but then I got a note from Tom once that my scripts weren't really scripts, so what do I know, LOL. I think you did well on this one, mikey. I hope to potlatch again next weekend with ya'all~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
Comment from Sasha
You did a terrific job with this. I love the characters and the verbal interaction between them. Excellent dialogue, great subject, and superbly presented. I enjoy these challenges, they inspire some terrific posts. I bet the snobby couple will be less obnoxious...if they ever decide to come back to Vegas.
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You did a terrific job with this. I love the characters and the verbal interaction between them. Excellent dialogue, great subject, and superbly presented. I enjoy these challenges, they inspire some terrific posts. I bet the snobby couple will be less obnoxious...if they ever decide to come back to Vegas.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
Comment from Mary Wakeford
This was great, Mikey. I see I need to up my game after reading yours. Love how you built the scene details and the character backgrounds. The uptight couple...lol, then the people they insulted saving then in the end. The insertion of historical figures through the mind of schizophrenic mind was brilliant.
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This was great, Mikey. I see I need to up my game after reading yours. Love how you built the scene details and the character backgrounds. The uptight couple...lol, then the people they insulted saving then in the end. The insertion of historical figures through the mind of schizophrenic mind was brilliant.
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
Comment from barkingdog
I've always enjoyed your sense of humor and how well you can intermingle characters and put a good twist on an ending.
All's well that ends well, especially if Will Rogers has the last word.
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I've always enjoyed your sense of humor and how well you can intermingle characters and put a good twist on an ending.
All's well that ends well, especially if Will Rogers has the last word.
:) e
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2017