Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a wonderful contest entry with spot on line and syllable count. I really enjoyed the simplicity of the observation as "giggles" so make a 'joyful noise unto the Lord'. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind comments and best wishes. :) Carolyn

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hello Carolyn,

So nice to see that you are back. I hope that all is well with you and yours. This poem is an excellent entry for the 2-4-2 contest. Love "joy noise"! Syllable count is spot on, and the artwork is the perfect complement to your write.

Good luck in the contest!

Connie

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you Connie, :) Carolyn

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Carolyn, Children's giggles are always fun to hear. They make
us want to laugh along with them. A very nice entry for the
2 4 2 poetry contest. A great picture you found to go with it.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thanks, Judy :) Carolyn

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. The joyful laughter and giggles of children are always a pleasure to experience while we watch them play.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you Sandra, :) Carolyn

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

I love how you call "giggles" a "joy noise." It's funny how wonderful a child's giggle sounds--and how we have to beware when they stop--it usually means the child is getting into trouble. The framing of the verse within the frame of the two children swinging also has a positive impact on the poem's mood.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I appreciate all you have said. :) Carolyn

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done Carolyn, a nice entry in this 2/4/2 contest, you've done a good job in an otherwise difficult form to create a meaning, good scribing, and I wishing you and Larry a happy, prosperous new year, good luck, my friend, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you dear Roy and the same to you and Elaine. :) Carolyn

reply by royowen on 07-Jan-2017

You are one favourite girl Carolyn

Comment from Tsukuyomi969

Excellent

I agree with this absolutely, children laughing are a joy to hear, especially that squeal of excitement. Too many can be a bit... Lol good luck in the contest. Cheers.

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you fir stopping by and commenting. I am delighted you enjoyed the poem. :) Carolyn

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this great 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. I especially liked the part about the giggles as our grandson is two and a half and he giggles a lot. Very good wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017

Thank you Teri, we too have grandchildren, when Ashlyn giggled, it made me laugh so hard, my sides hurt. She is 15 now and loves that story. :) Carolyn