Comment from
Sasha
What a marvelous Christmas poem. Beautifully written, excellent rhythm and rhyme. I have heard the story before but you present it in a new way that touched my heart deeply. Thank you so much for sharing this gem with us.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2016
Comment from
Mrs Happy Poet
This is well written my friend such a loving God we have to send his son down to earth for us all to be given the chance of eternal life we have to do our best to let him in and guide us through our journey this is very beautiful regards Jill
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2016