To Last Forever
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27 total reviews
Comment from Matthew Franklin
Nice poem. You have a lot going on here with your references to Beethoven and Babylon. I especially like the two middle stanzas and the idea of heart beating new world and paradise around. Well done.
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Nice poem. You have a lot going on here with your references to Beethoven and Babylon. I especially like the two middle stanzas and the idea of heart beating new world and paradise around. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
Comment from Lu Saluna
Very thought provoking and fires the imagination.
Seeking peace, spirituality, love and fulfillment.
Very thought provoking indeed, a well written piece.
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Very thought provoking and fires the imagination.
Seeking peace, spirituality, love and fulfillment.
Very thought provoking indeed, a well written piece.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
Comment from DonandVicki
A poetic verse that is spoken with a lot of emotion and soul. A very surrealistic feel to it. It engaged my imagination and inspires me.
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A poetic verse that is spoken with a lot of emotion and soul. A very surrealistic feel to it. It engaged my imagination and inspires me.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
Comment from dmt1967
This poem is great, although, very hard to understand. I take it from the photos it is about a famous composer; maybe. I liked the black and white photos as this makes the poet very retro. Thank you for sharing.
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This poem is great, although, very hard to understand. I take it from the photos it is about a famous composer; maybe. I liked the black and white photos as this makes the poet very retro. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
Comment from Ricky1024
"Son...
"Look what U Done?
Life...
"Exceptional Relief...
"Latterday Saint Priest..
"Christ......
Twice...
"Crucifixation...
"Crucified...
"Hung...
"Cross..
"Died?
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"Son...
"Look what U Done?
Life...
"Exceptional Relief...
"Latterday Saint Priest..
"Christ......
Twice...
"Crucifixation...
"Crucified...
"Hung...
"Cross..
"Died?
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
Comment from djsaxon
Great song - awful movie. woman - women? (moot). You continue to challenge. There IS a god. Your poen is cherished and unique. DJ xx
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Great song - awful movie. woman - women? (moot). You continue to challenge. There IS a god. Your poen is cherished and unique. DJ xx
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
Comment from RGstar
This one was more the potency of words and what they depict rather than a narrative, and that is why I have learned to enjoy your work, no matter the subject matter, for there is an intensity that many do not take the time to find. I know your meanings pretty well and there is strength and depth within your writing...within the boundaries of that great cryptic style you can call your own. Perhaps not easy for the school book reviewer but perfect for the artistry of poets.
My best wishes.
Have a good day, my brother.
RG
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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This one was more the potency of words and what they depict rather than a narrative, and that is why I have learned to enjoy your work, no matter the subject matter, for there is an intensity that many do not take the time to find. I know your meanings pretty well and there is strength and depth within your writing...within the boundaries of that great cryptic style you can call your own. Perhaps not easy for the school book reviewer but perfect for the artistry of poets.
My best wishes.
Have a good day, my brother.
RG
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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woo now that is power...to be recognized by it.
I will forever appreciate you man...love you my Brother. Michael
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Tobe recognized by what is written is the battle won Michael.
Have a good day.
Comment from Yvon
Seemed like an erotica type of poem with hidden meanings all over the place. Seems as though the character of this poem is bound in a battle of his lusting soul. That is what i got out of this.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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Seemed like an erotica type of poem with hidden meanings all over the place. Seems as though the character of this poem is bound in a battle of his lusting soul. That is what i got out of this.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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erotica...?
hm...well I never intended to turn you on I swear....but I suppose poetry does have that power. Yvon...everyone's fully clothed in this one. I dont know perhaps something you've read triggered another memory some what realatible...I just dont know, I'm guessing. anyway thanks for the stop by. love Michael
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(Seemed) is the word. you definitely never turned me on, but your response did make me laugh!
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laughter is the food of youth....I'm going to stay young forever...-wink-
Comment from amada
This is a provocative and at the same time, Excellent Work. I like the touch of soft erotica in these lines "forbidden fruits fullness /never knew color so in love." Oh, I like those colors in love, beautiful expression.
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This is a provocative and at the same time, Excellent Work. I like the touch of soft erotica in these lines "forbidden fruits fullness /never knew color so in love." Oh, I like those colors in love, beautiful expression.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
Comment from Writer51
This is an interesting poem. I had to go back and read it a few times. Sometimes I can be dense, but I finally put it together. It's like the fog clearing. You have a message of the early creation of earth and Adam and Eve and the human quest.
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This is an interesting poem. I had to go back and read it a few times. Sometimes I can be dense, but I finally put it together. It's like the fog clearing. You have a message of the early creation of earth and Adam and Eve and the human quest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
