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Pride won't hold you up...106 total reviews
Comment from EricBrady
I had to read this one after reading Dean's reference number for inspiring him. Your words ring true and powerful. We are nation full of pride standing on the edge of a crumbling cliff. We must get away from the edge and get anchored to what this nation was founded on, and that would be God. We must humble ourselves and get back on our knees. Wonderfully written .
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
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I had to read this one after reading Dean's reference number for inspiring him. Your words ring true and powerful. We are nation full of pride standing on the edge of a crumbling cliff. We must get away from the edge and get anchored to what this nation was founded on, and that would be God. We must humble ourselves and get back on our knees. Wonderfully written .
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
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Thanks Eric, so much for these reassuring words and insightful review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from JanPerry
I have enjoyed reading your inscription to your poem. It certainly rings true of men's misdeeds amongst men. As far as the U.S. is concerned, I visited in 2013 and thought that every place had a black American working there. This is held true as their policy of hiring the black American.
In that regard the U.S. has held it's ideals of serving mankind and helping others.
Nice work.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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I have enjoyed reading your inscription to your poem. It certainly rings true of men's misdeeds amongst men. As far as the U.S. is concerned, I visited in 2013 and thought that every place had a black American working there. This is held true as their policy of hiring the black American.
In that regard the U.S. has held it's ideals of serving mankind and helping others.
Nice work.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
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Thanks, so much for these words of wisdom and marvellous review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from tbacha58
Remember this if you wear pride, and think your nation's best,
yes, history proves that faith in might, will lead you to time's test.
The Bible says walk humbly with, your God 'cause He promotes-
and you will find if you wear pride, you'll wear waste's tattered coat.
Beautiful description in your poem, that picture reminded me of my country when it was at war for 16 years. Loved your poem and the rhyming. Thanks Terry xoxo I am trying to come back of nearly a year away.
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Remember this if you wear pride, and think your nation's best,
yes, history proves that faith in might, will lead you to time's test.
The Bible says walk humbly with, your God 'cause He promotes-
and you will find if you wear pride, you'll wear waste's tattered coat.
Beautiful description in your poem, that picture reminded me of my country when it was at war for 16 years. Loved your poem and the rhyming. Thanks Terry xoxo I am trying to come back of nearly a year away.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2016
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Thanks Terry, so much for these delightful words and wonderful review, and the lovely stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Joan E.
I was alerted to your poem by Dean Kuch in his version of this "storm". I admired your rhymed quatrains, history lesson and focus on "pride" plus use of the "tattered coat" metaphor. Hopefully, we will wake up to what made us great before it is too late- Joan
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I was alerted to your poem by Dean Kuch in his version of this "storm". I admired your rhymed quatrains, history lesson and focus on "pride" plus use of the "tattered coat" metaphor. Hopefully, we will wake up to what made us great before it is too late- Joan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks Joan for your wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Liberty Justice
WELL SAID! Roy, you teach a lesson in foolish pride. Historical events drive home your points about how "pride goes before a fall." Dramatic episodes portrayed. liberty justice
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WELL SAID! Roy, you teach a lesson in foolish pride. Historical events drive home your points about how "pride goes before a fall." Dramatic episodes portrayed. liberty justice
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks LJ, for these insightful words and a great review I appreciate it! blessings, Roy
Comment from Marykelly
This poem is a commentary on nations that have risen to power only to lose that power. I think that the strength of our country has been its founding principles based on Judeo/Christian values and the importance of individuals in society. As long as the individuals respect and honor the God that made this country great it will stay great, but your poem raises a warning to those who let their own egos and points of view jeopardize this country's basic values. Your message is timely and needs to be heard.
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This poem is a commentary on nations that have risen to power only to lose that power. I think that the strength of our country has been its founding principles based on Judeo/Christian values and the importance of individuals in society. As long as the individuals respect and honor the God that made this country great it will stay great, but your poem raises a warning to those who let their own egos and points of view jeopardize this country's basic values. Your message is timely and needs to be heard.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks Mary, for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it! blessings, Roy
Comment from Aussie
Well written quatrains with a good message. Man has warred against man for centuries, plundering for gold and land. Today, we should not be so complacent, the future is in our hands, which way will we choose. To a laid-back, indulgent lifestyle or love one another and do good?
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Well written quatrains with a good message. Man has warred against man for centuries, plundering for gold and land. Today, we should not be so complacent, the future is in our hands, which way will we choose. To a laid-back, indulgent lifestyle or love one another and do good?
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks Kay, for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it! blessings, Roy
Comment from Leineco
Masterfully done Roy - particularly in light of today's contentious
Presidential Election season. Both sides play on pride - IMHO one
side pairs it with hope, the other with fear. Appealing to America's
pride can either lead us to efforts designed to elevate all , or lead
us to cower behind walls of isolated callousness.
History has shown us over and over again, the nation that succumbs
to self-interest at the expense of the the less advantaged has crumbled
under the weight of their hubris. You make that case well in your
poem. . .too bad man never seems to learn the importance of
he who fails to heed the lessons of history is doomed to repeat it
Very nicely done poem Roy.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Masterfully done Roy - particularly in light of today's contentious
Presidential Election season. Both sides play on pride - IMHO one
side pairs it with hope, the other with fear. Appealing to America's
pride can either lead us to efforts designed to elevate all , or lead
us to cower behind walls of isolated callousness.
History has shown us over and over again, the nation that succumbs
to self-interest at the expense of the the less advantaged has crumbled
under the weight of their hubris. You make that case well in your
poem. . .too bad man never seems to learn the importance of
he who fails to heed the lessons of history is doomed to repeat it
Very nicely done poem Roy.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it! blessings, Roy
Comment from Javed05
This is a thoughtful poem. good imagery created by the words. Found it engaging . It flows smoothly. good rhyming as well. Thank you
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This is a thoughtful poem. good imagery created by the words. Found it engaging . It flows smoothly. good rhyming as well. Thank you
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks for these insightful words and great review I appreciate it! blessings, Roy
Comment from Loren (7)
Pride is a heavy coat to wear in my opinion. Whenever I put it on I feel as if others are staring, asking, who do you think you are? And, they are right ... nobody, Whenever we put "self" before a word to describe our accomplishments we enter the enemy's territory. Looking back at the history you've penned here, I'm sure he (the enemy) dances with glee. Loren
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Pride is a heavy coat to wear in my opinion. Whenever I put it on I feel as if others are staring, asking, who do you think you are? And, they are right ... nobody, Whenever we put "self" before a word to describe our accomplishments we enter the enemy's territory. Looking back at the history you've penned here, I'm sure he (the enemy) dances with glee. Loren
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2016
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Thanks Loeren for these generous insightful words and reflective review. Yes I think he probably does, but even he is God's servant, thanks for the lovely stars, I appreciate it! blessings, Roy