Crystal Clothing Heals
Contest entry,13 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Hi Mystic Angel;
-It seems you have a trusting belief in a commitment to your amethyst that is one nearest to your heart: "I know my angels hover near when on my throat the stone shines rear. For every soul there is a stone which to the heavens we are honed." As you can see the last word of my quote of yours I have used the past tense or the word honed which I believe is the proper spelling of the word in this context of your sentence. I see how much you favor your amethyst necklace is you write about it in a very amicable way and how you feel the need for having it close to you. This imagery is quite clear and vividly descriptive throughout your writing: "I place it near my heart to say that I will be forever graced and never be by God displaced."
-I like your choice of pictures of the amethyst colored background and foreground of a tree which I think is effectively appropriate for your poem.
-Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest and may you have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016
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Hi Mystic Angel;
-It seems you have a trusting belief in a commitment to your amethyst that is one nearest to your heart: "I know my angels hover near when on my throat the stone shines rear. For every soul there is a stone which to the heavens we are honed." As you can see the last word of my quote of yours I have used the past tense or the word honed which I believe is the proper spelling of the word in this context of your sentence. I see how much you favor your amethyst necklace is you write about it in a very amicable way and how you feel the need for having it close to you. This imagery is quite clear and vividly descriptive throughout your writing: "I place it near my heart to say that I will be forever graced and never be by God displaced."
-I like your choice of pictures of the amethyst colored background and foreground of a tree which I think is effectively appropriate for your poem.
-Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest and may you have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much for such lovely words of encouragement. I appreciate it more than you can ever know.
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You are very welcome Monica.
Alex
Comment from dragonpoet
It sounds like you have a good luck charm. Is it amethyst because it is your birthstone. It is good to have something can be so peace giving.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
draggonpoet
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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It sounds like you have a good luck charm. Is it amethyst because it is your birthstone. It is good to have something can be so peace giving.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
draggonpoet
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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No, amethyst is a protective stone I wear to clear unwanted energies around me. I am an empath - and must have cleansing around me always Rose quartz and Kunzite are two other crystals I keep close :) ....... it took a serious illness for me to become seriously understanding of the healing in nature around us, I am very grateful for your time and feedback.
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I didn't know about these stones.
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Comment from zanya
An interesting angle on the beautiful gem stone -the Amethyst - it has a special quality and appeal - these quatrains serve to highlight it s healing and protective properties
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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An interesting angle on the beautiful gem stone -the Amethyst - it has a special quality and appeal - these quatrains serve to highlight it s healing and protective properties
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Amethyst is a natural healing stone going back many centuries. I use it for its protective qualities for each of the four primary archangels are attached to it in some way. Thank you very much for such kind and encouraging feedback.