Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the childlike nature and the faith that children place in those things that an adult may not. Kids are a great example of the way adults should place their faith in things of a higher calling, trust, faith, simple belief. Well done Ine, nicely scribed, blessings, Roy
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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed second part of the week. Thanks.

reply by royowen on 16-Jun-2016

Most welcome Ine

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Oh, Ine, that was a precious story, l loved it. I do hope you can finish this book of little bed time stories, they are just wonderful. ~Really well done, my friend. xsx
Sandra .

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a very nice little short children's story which I enjoyed reading. Good luck with your book, Ine. I think this is a good addition to it and will be appealing to kids. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I question the aging method, but we are dealing with young minds. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read..

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Such a sweet little bedtime story. Made me remember of my childhood.
There are many ladybugs this year. I'm happy with it, because they eat all lices on the roses and are very useful. Lovely story for the little ones.

Fia

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

Your story about the lady bug is really cute. I think the third line would sound better if you changed it to, Douglas spots his sister and asks, "What do you have?" he wants to know. That way you wouldn't use the word "there" in the two lines. Otherwise it is perfect.

Kat

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thanks for your very kind review, Ine. Have a good second part of the week.

reply by MizKat on 15-Jun-2016

Yes, I will and hope you will too. Kat

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is such a fun and cute little bedtime story. I used to love finding ladybugs as a child.

It's good to see you writing more again.

Teresa

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thanks for your very kind review, Ine. Have a good second part of the week.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Good

A very touching story about the loving interaction between a brother and sister. Not only do they show gentleness with each other, but with the insect as well. A great way to teach kids how to treat other living things.
Rhonda

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thanks for your very kind review, Ine. Have a good second part of the week.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a cute story about the children with the ladybug. I enjoyed it. Do ladybugs get their dots to show how long they have lived? Patricia

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 Comment Written 15-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thanks for your very kind review, Ine. Have a good second part of the week. Don't know for sure.