Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I did not expect to find a spiritual poem in the 5-7-5 format. Thank you for sharing your happiness. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016

Thank you reviewing and commenting ,I appreciate it. God Bless

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

I did smile!

Love the simple, Sunday School fundamental declaration of scriptural truth.

So much expressed in so few words.

Well done!

Sonali

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016

Thank you,I am so glad you smiled, keep smiling.God Bless

Comment from Ginger Banks

Excellent

A beautiful truth, even if it doesn't fall under the headline of humor per se. I enjoyed the photo chosen for this piece also and find it to git seamlessly, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016

Thank you reviewing and commenting I do appreciate it,God bless

reply by Ginger Banks on 15-Jun-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

The message in your poem is a great reason to smile. We all should thank God daily, just for waking up in the morning, no day is promised. I like the picture that you chose to display your poem, the flow is nice for such a short poem. Good use of syllables, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you for taking the time to review and comment.I do appreciate it. I agree that we should thank God daily .Keep smiling God bless.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent 5-7-5 poem! The author's words strong, heart felt and engaging.
Yes, the reader did smile as she read the poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the words and theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you for your review and comment,I appreciate it,I am glad you smiled.Keep smiling ,God Bless

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

And anyone who is smiling is a believer. I haven't seen many 5-7-5s on the Christian theme but this one says it like it is in just the right number of syllables. I think those who set this contest expected you to tell us something funny, but this proves that not only jokes make us smile.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you for reviewing and your comment,I do appreciate it.Keep smiling,God Bless,

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Very poignant Just for Fun 5-7-5 entry. Quite inspirational and pleasing to read. Enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you for reviewing and sweet comment,I do appreciate it.God bless and hugs back at ya.

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 13-Jun-2016

Thanks very much...can never get enough blessings or hugs!!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Anonymous Member on 16-Jun-2016

Thanks very much...can never get enough blessings or hugs!!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, I am smiling a great 5.7.5 on the prompt, any one who believes in Jesus should have a smile. good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you for reviewing and commenting,I do appreciate it.Any one who believes in Jesus has a reason to smile.Have a great day God bless

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, This is not a funny poem more of a spiritual one. You did a good job with the syllable count and that is important for a 5/7/5 poem. The presentation is cute and easy to read. Good job!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you for reviewing and commenting .I do appreciate it.Hope you have a great day,God Bless

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, A Reason to Smile, uses the seventeen syllables to connect the readers with the knowledge that we are not free, but purchased at a price. .....

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you for reviewing and comment I appreciate it.