Christine's Poems
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Now this did make me laugh, although surely you must have had an inkling that putting XXX after your name may not have been the best idea! LOL
You need a little space here - PORN site,with, after the comma.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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Hi there,
Now this did make me laugh, although surely you must have had an inkling that putting XXX after your name may not have been the best idea! LOL
You need a little space here - PORN site,with, after the comma.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 15-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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Hi GMG, Thats exactly what my kids said, but I didn't put the xxx when I put Chrissy it just came back with that and I just asssumed that was the name I was given so just went with that, I think Dr Google just assumed was me . Oh Lordy did I get a shock when I found out the mistake . thanks for picking up the space I will change it . Cheers
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sure you all had a real good laugh at your surprise when a porn site came up under your FanStory name.
Laughter is the best medicine. Especially, if you can laugh at the things you do.
Might as well. Everyone else seems to be.
Should be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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Sure you all had a real good laugh at your surprise when a porn site came up under your FanStory name.
Laughter is the best medicine. Especially, if you can laugh at the things you do.
Might as well. Everyone else seems to be.
Should be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 15-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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Hi Brett, Thanks so much for your review. much appreciated and yes just as well we can laugh at ourselves I certainly can at me my family just shake their heads LOL .
Comment from Domino 2
I'm not sure about the further explanation in your notes, with respect, as with such a limited word requirement, it should ALL be said in the main body of the story - and anyway, you more or less repeat the them in your notes.
This is a fun story, though I'm not sure of the relevance on the new number, '710'.
Maybe 'YOUR' antics on the porn site kept hubby around, hoping for some replays. Just kidding. ;-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
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reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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I'm not sure about the further explanation in your notes, with respect, as with such a limited word requirement, it should ALL be said in the main body of the story - and anyway, you more or less repeat the them in your notes.
This is a fun story, though I'm not sure of the relevance on the new number, '710'.
Maybe 'YOUR' antics on the porn site kept hubby around, hoping for some replays. Just kidding. ;-)
Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx
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Comment Written 15-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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Hi Ray, Thanks for your review. and fun comments for my 50 word story. somehow when I applied for a member name I couldn't use Christine so typed in Chrissy and up came Chrissyxxx I just thought I must have also typed the xxx by mistake and anyway used this for a few weeks and then discovered that Chrissyxxx is a Pornstar. I couldn't dissassociate myself quick enough LOL. 710 is my birthday date and month. Now I am game enough to tell this story I can laugh but really did get a shock Ha Ha. Cheers Anonomous writer
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I got the first bit - it was just what seemed to be random numbers.
Now I know it's your birthday, all I need is your address and I can send you a card. ;-)
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Ha Ha Ray. Must keep some secrets
Comment from mfowler
I'm going to have to check out all of the pseudonyms on Fanstory now. Imagine
finding your own name on a porn site? Oh, yeah, you did. What an amazing
coincidence. Luckily it was your sister exploring with you. You can enjoy the laugh
and share the embarrassment. Mind you, it also stays around for the rest of your
lives as a family story. Yeah, that would be good. I think you chose a great idea
for a fifty word story. You tell your story in fifty words. It gets the humour and the
tale shared with minimum of fuss. Well done. Best of luck.
You do realise you're no longer anonymous.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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I'm going to have to check out all of the pseudonyms on Fanstory now. Imagine
finding your own name on a porn site? Oh, yeah, you did. What an amazing
coincidence. Luckily it was your sister exploring with you. You can enjoy the laugh
and share the embarrassment. Mind you, it also stays around for the rest of your
lives as a family story. Yeah, that would be good. I think you chose a great idea
for a fifty word story. You tell your story in fifty words. It gets the humour and the
tale shared with minimum of fuss. Well done. Best of luck.
You do realise you're no longer anonymous.
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Comment Written 15-May-2016
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
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Hi mfowler. Thanks for reading my story and for your review. I wasn't sure how this would go , but If you think it is Ok then I'll just go with it. I think it was the xxx that did it LOL. Can laugh now but was horrified when we discovered this. My kids laughed their heads off Even my husband had a bit of a giggle as well as my friends. I can alway laugh at myself and never take myself too seriously, Well it's out there now . Cheers Anonomous writer
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Hi Have removed my user name from the story can't remove the other Chrissyxxx as that's the point of the story LOL I'll see how it goes . Cheers Anonomous